[MOIMS-NAV-EXEC] ODM P2.41 Review Assignments

[Berry, David S (US 3920)]

All:



Attached are materials for the "divide & conquer" proofreading of the ODM P2.41 that Dan recently distributed. The "changes accepted" version is attached because this is meant to be a "proofreading review" rather than a "technical review" (i.e., changes tracked are not necessary). A blank CRM is attached for hour comments. Finally, the section assignments are attached.



You will note that several of the sections are not included. In general, these are from the "legacy" ODM, and we have expended a fair amount of energy to NOT change most of these sections.



This is a proofreading review based on the assessment that this version of the ODM is technically ready for publication.



Assignments are on average 18 pages: 108 pages requiring proofreading, 6 groups of reviewers a few are a bit longer, a few a bit shorter.



Please note your assignments in the attachment, review the assigned pages for editorial corrections, fill out the CRM if you find anything that needs to be corrected**, and send it to Dan and me by 30-Apr-2021. You may also send to the WG mailing list if you prefer. Note that you are free to proofread more of the document if you so wish, but please try to cover the assigned pages.



** Definition of "anything that needs to be corrected": The focus of this effort is grammar, spelling, awkward wording, missing words, etc. However, from a technical standpoint, if you think there is something that is WRONG, identify that; if there is something UNCLEAR, suggest a clarification. Otherwise, if it's stylistic or opinion or alternative technically valid formulation, leave it alone in this proofreading. Ignore any page numbering errors or footer artifacts; these will be corrected by the CCSDS Technical Editor.



Please advise if issues arise...



Regards, and Thanks!

David
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