[MOIMS-NAV-EXEC] Attitude Data Messages P1.11 Review Assignments

[Berry, David S (US 3920)]

All:



Attached are "divide and conquer" review assignments for the ADM P1.11 document that Alain recently distributed (Tuesday, March 9, 2021). For the "changes tracked" and "changes accepted" versions of the document, please see Alain Lamy's email. If you no longer have the email, please let me know and I will forward it to you.



Attached also is a blank CRM in which you may record your comments. This review is a technical review (i.e., not a proofreading review), so comments on any aspect of the document are acceptable, with a concentration on getting the technical material correct.



Please note your assignments in the attachment, review the assigned pages for editorial corrections, fill out the CRM if you find anything that needs to be corrected, and send it to Alain, Julie, and me by 30-Apr-2021. You may also send to the WG mailing list if you prefer. Note that you are free to proofread more of the document if you so wish, but please try to cover the assigned pages.



In general, you can ignore any page numbering errors or footer artifacts; these will be corrected by the CCSDS Technical Editor.

Please advise if issues arise...

Regards, and Thanks!

David
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