[Sls-slp] Comments CESG Review of USLP RED Book

[Moury Gilles]

Dear Greg,

OK with your proposed responses. Just 3 modifications inserted in your response file:

Best regards,
Gilles

Gilles MOURY
CNES Toulouse
De : Kazz, Greg J (312B) [mailto:greg.j.kazz at jpl.nasa.gov]
Envoyé : lundi 25 juillet 2016 20:30
À : sls-slp at mailman.ccsds.org
Cc : Moury Gilles; Gian.Paolo.Calzolari at esa.int; Thomas Gannett
Objet : Comments CESG Review of USLP RED Book

Dear SLP WG,

Please review the attached Word document containing my comments on Peter Shames' CESG review of the proposed first Red 1 Version of USLP.
I would appreciate it if you would provide me your comments on my responses in the attached Word document by the end of this week, July 29. Thereafter, I will send these comments on to the secretariat as final. Thank you !

Best regards,

Greg Kazz
Chairman CCSDS SLS-SLP WG
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