[Sls-slp] Additional comments on SDLS book

[Kazz, Greg J (313B)]

Dear SDLS WG,

Attached are three word documents for your review.
They are the result of a second review conducted by the SLP WG to ensure that the interfaces between the SDLS book and the TM, TC, AOS Space Data Link specifications (most of which are in 5 year review now) are well matched.

The first word document contains a log of proposed changes that introduces you to the disconnects we have found and the suggestions we recommend. The suggestions made are in the spirit of minimizing the changes to the SDLS book as well as the link layer books.  Note that these  changes in no way should interfere with the SDLS plan to publish this book on schedule. Sorry that we couldn't have come up with them in our initial review. These proposed changes came about due to the detailed review of updating the individual sections of TM, TC, and AOS due to the SDLS requirements.

The second word document contains the actual red line changes that are proposed. Note that these changes have been made on top of the changes that came out of the last CCSDS meeting to the SDLS book but do not contain those original changes that SLP have already provided to the SDLS WG chair. (SLP is willing to describe each of these changes in RID form if necessary, but we hope that would not be required.)

The 3rd word document is more SLP centric but is provided to you for your review as well. It is an updated version of the TM Space Data Link Blue book that limits most of the SDLS based changes to the non-normative sections of the document (Chap2) and contains only minimial changes to the normative parts of the document while creating a new Chap 6 (SDLS requirements on TM). This replaces the first attempt of updating the TM book by SLP that proposed substantial changes in Chap 4 . If feedback is positive, SLP will continue and provide an update to TC and AOS in a similar fashion.

These files have also been placed on the CWE under: http://tiny.cc/zzrqiw

Looking forward to your feedback.

Best regards,

Greg Kazz
Chairman SLS-SLP WG
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