[Moims-dai] Review of Latest version of OAIS

[Mark Conrad]

David,

I disagree about the used of CDO in this paragraph, but won't argue the
point further.

However, in the second paragraph under Figure 2-3 the definition of
Packaging Information:

"The Packaging Information is that information which, either physically or
logically, binds, identifies and relates the Information Object(s) and its
major components, if any"

 still does not match the definition in the Terminology section:

"The information that describes how the components of an Information
Package are logically or physically bound together and how to identify and
extract the components."


It would be much clearer if both places used the definition from the
Terminology section.

Thanks again for herding the cats on this!

Mark


On Tue, Sep 24, 2019 at 2:18 PM David Giaretta <david at giaretta.org> wrote:

> Mark
>
>
>
> I included all your suggestions except the one that is a few paragraphs
> under Fig 2-3 which starts:
>
> The Information Object in the package may have various components. Of
> particular significance is the case in which the Information Object is made
> up of Content Information, which is the original target of preservation,
> plus its related Preservation Description Information (PDI). Only after the
> Content Data Object has been clearly defined can an assessment of the
> Preservation Description Information be made. The Preservation Description
> Information applies to the Content Data Object and is needed to preserve
> the Content Data Object, to ensure it is clearly identified, and to
> understand the environment in which the Content Data Object was created…
>
>
>
> Your comment was :
>
> *The previous sentence relates the Content Information to the PDI. All of
> the references to CDO in this paragraph should be changed to CI. ???*
>
>
>
> However this would contradict previous decisions to refer to CDO so I
> don’t believe that this should be accepted.
>
>
>
> So I think we are good to go.
>
>
>
> Regards
>
>
>
> ..David
>
>
>
> *From:* MOIMS-DAI <moims-dai-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org> *On Behalf Of *Mark
> Conrad
> *Sent:* 20 September 2019 21:28
> *To:* MOIMS-Data Archive Ingestion <moims-dai at mailman.ccsds.org>
> *Subject:* [Moims-dai] Review of Latest version of OAIS
>
>
>
> Hi,
>
> I have completed my review. I only have a few comments. I have tagged my
> comments with ???
>
>
>
> Mark Conrad
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