<div dir="ltr">David,<div><br></div><div>I disagree about the used of CDO in this paragraph, but won't argue the point further. </div><div><br></div><div>However, in the second paragraph under Figure 2-3 the definition of Packaging Information:</div><div><br></div><div>"<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif;font-size:12pt;text-align:justify">The Packaging Information is that information which, either physically
or logically, binds, identifies and relates the </span><a style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif;font-size:12pt;text-align:justify"></a><a style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif;font-size:12pt;text-align:justify">Information Object(s) and its major
components, if any</a><a style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif;text-align:justify;font-size:10.6667px">"</a></div>
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information that describes how the components of an Information Package are
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</div><div><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div>It would be much clearer if both places used the definition from the Terminology section.</div><div><br></div><div>Thanks again for herding the cats on this!</div><div><br></div><div>Mark </div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div><br></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Tue, Sep 24, 2019 at 2:18 PM David Giaretta <<a href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div lang="EN-GB"><div class="gmail-m_3046130007284635774WordSection1"><p class="MsoNormal"><span>Mark<u></u><u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span>I included all your suggestions except the one that is a few paragraphs under Fig 2-3 which starts:<u></u><u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36pt"><span>The Information Object in the package may have various components. Of particular significance is the case in which the Information Object is made up of Content Information, which is the original target of preservation, plus its related Preservation Description Information (PDI). Only after the Content Data Object has been clearly defined can an assessment of the Preservation Description Information be made. The Preservation Description Information applies to the Content Data Object and is needed to preserve the Content Data Object, to ensure it is clearly identified, and to understand the environment in which the Content Data Object was created…<u></u><u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36pt"><span><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span>Your comment was :<u></u><u></u></span></p><p class="gmail-m_3046130007284635774MsoCommentText" style="margin-left:36pt"><i><span lang="EN-US">The previous sentence relates the Content Information to the PDI. All of the references to CDO in this paragraph should be changed to CI. ???<u></u><u></u></span></i></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36pt"><u></u> <u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">However this would contradict previous decisions to refer to CDO so I don’t believe that this should be accepted.<u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">So I think we are good to go.<u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">Regards<u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">..David<u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US"> MOIMS-DAI <<a href="mailto:moims-dai-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org" target="_blank">moims-dai-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org</a>> <b>On Behalf Of </b>Mark Conrad<br><b>Sent:</b> 20 September 2019 21:28<br><b>To:</b> MOIMS-Data Archive Ingestion <<a href="mailto:moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org" target="_blank">moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org</a>><br><b>Subject:</b> [Moims-dai] Review of Latest version of OAIS<u></u><u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><div><p class="MsoNormal">Hi, <u></u><u></u></p><div><p class="MsoNormal">I have completed my review. I only have a few comments. I have tagged my comments with ???<u></u><u></u></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p></div><div><div><div><div><div><div><div><div><div><div><div><p class="MsoNormal">Mark Conrad<br>NARA Information Services<u></u><u></u></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12pt">Systems Engineering Division (IT)<br>The National Archives and Records Administration<br>Erma Ora Byrd Conference and Learning Center<br>Building 494, Room 225<br>610 State Route 956<br>Rocket Center, WV 26726<br><br>Phone: 304-726-7820<br>Fax: 304-726-7802<br>Email: <a href="mailto:mark.conrad@nara.gov" target="_blank">mark.conrad@nara.gov</a> <u></u><u></u></p></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div>_______________________________________________<br>
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