[Moims-dai] FW: Comments on OAIS V3

Fri Jun 28 17:00:59 UTC 2019

Hello David
I am satisfied with your response to BBh22 and BBh36. I am not sure that I understand where you want to insert your new paragraph in response to BBh23.

Could please provide me with  more information ? (for instance, send me the text of the paragraph before your proposed insertion)

B. Behal
Directrice des Achats, des Recettes externes et des Affaires juridiques
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Objet : [Moims-dai] FW: Comments on OAIS V3

I've put some suggested text to respond to comments 22,23 and 36 in the appropriate rows in the spreadsheet.
Let me know if you have any other suggestions.

..David

From: Behal Brigitte <Brigitte.Behal at cnes.fr<mailto:Brigitte.Behal at cnes.fr>>
Sent: 28 June 2019 08:56
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Subject: RE: Comments on OAIS V3

Hello David and John

You did a remarkable job dispositioning my comments. There are only 3 comments whose response does not seem completely satisfactory  to me. These are BBh22, BBh23 & BBh36. You will find them in the file attached to this mail.

I am at our disposal if you need more information about these comments.

Best regards

B. Behal
Directrice des Achats, des Recettes externes et des Affaires juridiques
Bpi 1625
Tel: 73396

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Objet : RE: Comments on OAIS V3

Hi Brigitte

Thanks for letting us know. If Mario has any comments in the next 2 weeks we will integrate responses and send them to you both.

Regards

..David

From: Behal Brigitte <Brigitte.Behal at cnes.fr<mailto:Brigitte.Behal at cnes.fr>>
Sent: 06 June 2019 18:29
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Subject: RE: Comments on OAIS V3

Hello David
I will not be able to analyze your answers in the next 2 weeks. I come back to you end of June at the latest.

Best regards

B. Behal
Directrice des Achats, des Recettes externes et des Affaires juridiques
Bpi 1625
Tel: 73396

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Objet : RE: Comments on OAIS V3

Hi Brigitte

Here is the DAI collected response to your comments. If these are OK with you and if Mario does not have any other comments then we consider the document ready for agency and ISO review.

Regards

..David

From: Behal Brigitte <Brigitte.Behal at cnes.fr<mailto:Brigitte.Behal at cnes.fr>>
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Subject: Comments on OAIS V3

Hello David,

Please find my comments inserted in the attached file. My main points address:

  *   The preservation objectives : it is a new feature you have added in this version, but it may have major impacts on the design of the OAIS and in this document, these objectives do not seem to be defined at the beginning of the development of the OAIS nor validated by Management, which concerns me.
  *   the definitions that are not in line with the ones used by the SM&C WG and by other groups and should be reviewed

I remain at your disposal to discuss them.

Brigitte
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