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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue">Hello David<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue">I am satisfied with your response to BBh22 and BBh36. I am not sure that I understand where you want to insert your new paragraph in response to BBh23.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue">Could please provide me with more information ? (for instance, send me the text of the paragraph before your proposed insertion)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR">B. Behal<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR">Directrice des Achats, des Recettes externes et des Affaires juridiques<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR">Bpi 1625<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="mso-fareast-language:FR">De :</span></b><span style="mso-fareast-language:FR"> MOIMS-DAI <moims-dai-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org>
<b>De la part de</b> David Giaretta<br>
<b>Envoyé :</b> vendredi 28 juin 2019 14:35<br>
<b>À :</b> MOIMS-DAI List <moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org><br>
<b>Objet :</b> [Moims-dai] FW: Comments on OAIS V3<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">I’ve put some suggested text to respond to comments 22,23 and 36 in the appropriate rows in the spreadsheet.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Let me know if you have any other suggestions.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">..David<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB"> Behal Brigitte <<a href="mailto:Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr">Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr</a>>
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<b>Sent:</b> 28 June 2019 08:56<br>
<b>To:</b> David Giaretta <<a href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a>>; 'John Garrett' <<a href="mailto:garrett@his.com">garrett@his.com</a>><br>
<b>Cc:</b> 'Mario Merri' <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>; Sec-daj-d <<a href="mailto:Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr">Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr</a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: Comments on OAIS V3<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue">Hello David and John</span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue">You did a remarkable job dispositioning my comments. There are only 3 comments whose response does not seem completely satisfactory to me. These
are BBh22, BBh23 & BBh36. You will find them in the file attached to this mail.</span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue"> </span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue">I am at our disposal if you need more information about these comments.</span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue"> </span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue">Best regards</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR">B. Behal</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR">Directrice des Achats, des Recettes externes et des Affaires juridiques</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR">Bpi 1625</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR">Tel: 73396
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="mso-fareast-language:FR">De :</span></b><span style="mso-fareast-language:FR"> David Giaretta <<a href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a>>
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<b>Envoyé :</b> vendredi 7 juin 2019 13:11<br>
<b>À :</b> Behal Brigitte <<a href="mailto:Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr">Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr</a>><br>
<b>Cc :</b> 'John Garrett' <<a href="mailto:garrett@his.com">garrett@his.com</a>>; 'Thomas Gannett' <<a href="mailto:thomas.gannett@tgannett.net">thomas.gannett@tgannett.net</a>>; 'Mario Merri' <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>;
Sec-daj-d <<a href="mailto:Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr">Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr</a>><br>
<b>Objet :</b> RE: Comments on OAIS V3</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Hi Brigitte</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Thanks for letting us know. If Mario has any comments in the next 2 weeks we will integrate responses and send them to you both.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Regards</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">..David</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB"> Behal Brigitte <<a href="mailto:Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr">Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr</a>>
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<b>Sent:</b> 06 June 2019 18:29<br>
<b>To:</b> David Giaretta <<a href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a>><br>
<b>Cc:</b> 'John Garrett' <<a href="mailto:garrett@his.com">garrett@his.com</a>>; 'Thomas Gannett' <<a href="mailto:thomas.gannett@tgannett.net">thomas.gannett@tgannett.net</a>>; 'Mario Merri' <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>;
Sec-daj-d <<a href="mailto:Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr">Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr</a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: Comments on OAIS V3</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue">Hello David</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue">I will not be able to analyze your answers in the next 2 weeks. I come back to you end of June at the latest.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue">Best regards</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR">B. Behal</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR">Directrice des Achats, des Recettes externes et des Affaires juridiques</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR">Bpi 1625</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="mso-fareast-language:FR">De :</span></b><span style="mso-fareast-language:FR"> David Giaretta <<a href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a>>
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<b>Envoyé :</b> jeudi 6 juin 2019 17:31<br>
<b>À :</b> Behal Brigitte <<a href="mailto:Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr">Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr</a>><br>
<b>Cc :</b> 'John Garrett' <<a href="mailto:garrett@his.com">garrett@his.com</a>>; 'Thomas Gannett' <<a href="mailto:thomas.gannett@tgannett.net">thomas.gannett@tgannett.net</a>>; 'Mario Merri' <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>;
'Mario Merri' <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>; Sec-daj-d <<a href="mailto:Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr">Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr</a>><br>
<b>Objet :</b> RE: Comments on OAIS V3</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Hi Brigitte</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Here is the DAI collected response to your comments. If these are OK with you and if Mario does not have any other comments then we consider the document ready for agency and ISO review.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Regards</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">..David</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB"> Behal Brigitte <<a href="mailto:Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr">Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr</a>>
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<b>Sent:</b> 08 May 2019 17:29<br>
<b>To:</b> David Giaretta <<a href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a>><br>
<b>Cc:</b> 'John Garrett' <<a href="mailto:garrett@his.com">garrett@his.com</a>>; 'Thomas Gannett' <<a href="mailto:thomas.gannett@tgannett.net">thomas.gannett@tgannett.net</a>>; 'Mario Merri' <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>;
Mario Merri <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>; Sec-daj-d <<a href="mailto:Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr">Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr</a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Comments on OAIS V3</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue">Hello David,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue">Please find my comments inserted in the attached file. My main points address:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="color:blue;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">The preservation objectives : it is a new feature you have added in this version, but it may have major impacts on the
design of the OAIS and in this document, these objectives do not seem to be defined at the beginning of the development of the OAIS nor validated by Management, which concerns me.</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:blue;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">the definitions that are not in line with the ones used by the SM&C WG and by other groups and should be reviewed</span><o:p></o:p></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue">I remain at your disposal to discuss them.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue">Brigitte</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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