[Smwg] RE: SLS Comments on Extensible SCCS SM Concept Green Book
john.pietras at gst.com
Wed Aug 20 16:40:39 UTC 2014
Tom --- I will send you the updated original graphics files this afternoon.
From: Gian.Paolo.Calzolari at esa.int [mailto:Gian.Paolo.Calzolari at esa.int]
Sent: Wednesday, August 20, 2014 10:27 AM
To: John Pietras
Cc: CCSDS SMWG ML (smwg at mailman.ccsds.org); Nestor.Peccia at esa.int; Erik Barkley; Tom Gannett
Subject: Re: SLS Comments on Extensible SCCS SM Concept Green Book
I am satisfied with all your proposed dispositions.
No more condition holds and prevents next step by Secretariat.
From: John Pietras <john.pietras at gst.com<mailto:john.pietras at gst.com>>
To: "Gian.Paolo.Calzolari at esa.int<mailto:Gian.Paolo.Calzolari at esa.int>" <Gian.Paolo.Calzolari at esa.int<mailto:Gian.Paolo.Calzolari at esa.int>>,
Cc: "CCSDS SMWG ML (smwg at mailman.ccsds.org<mailto:smwg at mailman.ccsds.org>)" <smwg at mailman.ccsds.org<mailto:smwg at mailman.ccsds.org>>
Date: 30/07/2014 17:24
Subject: SLS Comments on Extensible SCCS SM Concept Green Book
Thank you for your detailed review of the proposed Green Book. I have responded to each of your concerns in a manner which I hope resolves your conditions for the publication of the book. I have attached a copy of your CESG review comments, annotated with my responses. I have also attached a marked-up copy of the draft Green Book with the proposed modifications included.
Note that there are a number of modifications in section 6 that are *not* the direct result of your comments, but rather due to changes to the data model that have occurred in the past few months. In some cases the changes made some of your comments non-applicable, but in all cases I tried to understand and comply with the spirit of your comments.
I look forward to your evaluation of the updated draft and whether it resolves the conditions that you have placed on the book.
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