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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Gian Paolo,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Thank you.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Tom --- I will send you the updated original graphics files this afternoon.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">John<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int [mailto:Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int]
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<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, August 20, 2014 10:27 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> John Pietras<br>
<b>Cc:</b> CCSDS SMWG ML (smwg@mailman.ccsds.org); Nestor.Peccia@esa.int; Erik Barkley; Tom Gannett<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: SLS Comments on Extensible SCCS SM Concept Green Book<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">John,</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif""> I am satisfied with all your proposed dispositions.</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">No more condition holds and prevents next step by Secretariat.</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Best regards</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Gian Paolo</span>
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<span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F">From: </span><span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">John Pietras <<a href="mailto:john.pietras@gst.com">john.pietras@gst.com</a>></span>
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<span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F">To: </span><span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">"<a href="mailto:Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int">Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int</a>" <<a href="mailto:Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int">Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int</a>>,
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<span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F">Cc: </span><span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">"CCSDS SMWG ML (<a href="mailto:smwg@mailman.ccsds.org">smwg@mailman.ccsds.org</a>)" <<a href="mailto:smwg@mailman.ccsds.org">smwg@mailman.ccsds.org</a>></span>
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<span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F">Date: </span><span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">30/07/2014 17:24</span>
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<span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F">Subject: </span><span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">SLS Comments on Extensible SCCS SM Concept Green Book</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Gian Paolo,</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Thank you for your detailed review of the proposed Green Book. I have responded to each of your concerns in a manner which I hope resolves your conditions for the publication of the book. I have
attached a copy of your CESG review comments, annotated with my responses. I have also attached a marked-up copy of the draft Green Book with the proposed modifications included.
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""> </span> <br>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Note that there are a number of modifications in section 6 that are *<b>not</b>* the direct result of your comments, but rather due to changes to the data model that have occurred in the past
few months. In some cases the changes made some of your comments non-applicable, but in all cases I tried to understand and comply with the spirit of your comments.</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">I look forward to your evaluation of the updated draft and whether it resolves the conditions that you have placed on the book.</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Best regards,</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">John </span><br>
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