UC [Sls-slp] Re: Yet another draft update to Proximity-1 Green BookJan 24 2013

Thu Feb 7 11:28:56 UTC 2013

OK, more comments added.
Not the end of the story I guess (i.e. more comments may arrive)

Regards

Gian Paolo

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RE: UC [Sls-slp] Re: Yet another draft update to Proximity-1 Green BookJan 
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Greg / Enrico,

I have had a quick read through and added a few comments and changes. 
Speak later this afternoon / morning.

Document attached.

Matt.

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Subject: [Sls-slp] Re: Yet another draft update to Proximity-1 Green 
BookJan 24 2013

Enrico,

Thanks for your quick response and comments.

Greg

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Date: Wednesday, February 6, 2013 4:55 AM
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Subject: Re: Yet another draft update to Proximity-1 Green Book Jan 24 
2013

Greg, 

I reviewed the reference document for what concerns the PL sections and 
amended the following:

1) Section 2.3.3 

Forward/return data rates: "power of two" removed as per PL BB
Return link frequency changed as needed 

2) Footnote 2 

"not for cross-support" added as per PL BB

3) Section 3.3.6.4 

Frequency bands text aligned with PL BB 

4) Section 3.3.6.5 

I have not done anything but suggested that the whole section is removed 
since it does not contain any GB (or even BB) material but just a 
reference to a number of BB sections (some have new names/sections 
numbers, not reflected here.) 

5) Section 4.2.6 

Changed Bit to Symbol also in the title. 

There is also a need to edit figures 4-2, 4-3, 4-4, 4-5 and 5-1 to replace 
bit with symbol. I cannot edit them.

I take the opportunity of this email to invite the RFM WG colleagues to 
review the document and let me know if they have additional points that I 
missed.

Regards, Enrico 

P.S. For some reasons, Word marks your changes as mine ..... To avoid 
confusion, I highlighted mine in yellow.

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Date: 
24/01/2013 21:04 
Subject: 
Yet another draft update to Proximity-1 Green Book Jan 24 2013

All, 

After receiving several new inputs for the Prox-1 GB (including the CRC-32 
discussion that was submitted by ESA, other updates due to the inclusion 
of the LDPC in Prox-1, etc), I have posted this updated draft version on 
the CWE under: 

http://tinyurl.com/ajw9k3e

Note: It is the intent of the SLP WG to publish an updated Prox-1 GB 
(current version is 2003) ideally concurrent with the release of the three 
updated Prox-1 Blue books. So your comments, additions, subtractions, 
multiplications : ) are welcome before our April 16 meeting! 

Best regards, 

Greg 
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