UC [Sls-slp] Re: Yet another draft update to Proximity-1 Green BookJan 24 2013

Cosby Matthew MCOSBY at qinetiq.com
Thu Feb 7 10:27:36 UTC 2013

Greg / Enrico,


I have had a quick read through and added a few comments and changes.
Speak later this afternoon / morning.


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Subject: [Sls-slp] Re: Yet another draft update to Proximity-1 Green
BookJan 24 2013




Thanks for your quick response and comments.




From: "Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int" <Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int>
Date: Wednesday, February 6, 2013 4:55 AM
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Subject: Re: Yet another draft update to Proximity-1 Green Book Jan 24



I reviewed the reference document for what concerns the PL sections and
amended the following:

1) Section 2.3.3 

Forward/return data rates: "power of two" removed as per PL BB
Return link frequency changed as needed 

2) Footnote 2 

"not for cross-support" added as per PL BB

3) Section 

Frequency bands text aligned with PL BB 

4) Section 

I have not done anything but suggested that the whole section is removed
since it does not contain any GB (or even BB) material but just a
reference to a number of BB sections (some have new names/sections
numbers, not reflected here.) 

5) Section 4.2.6 

Changed Bit to Symbol also in the title. 

There is also a need to edit figures 4-2, 4-3, 4-4, 4-5 and 5-1 to
replace bit with symbol. I cannot edit them.

I take the opportunity of this email to invite the RFM WG colleagues to
review the document and let me know if they have additional points that
I missed.

Regards, Enrico 

P.S. For some reasons, Word marks your changes as mine ..... To avoid
confusion, I highlighted mine in yellow.


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24/01/2013 21:04 


Yet another draft update to Proximity-1 Green Book Jan 24 2013




After receiving several new inputs for the Prox-1 GB (including the
CRC-32 discussion that was submitted by ESA, other updates due to the
inclusion of the LDPC in Prox-1, etc), I have posted this updated draft
version on the CWE under: 

http://tinyurl.com/ajw9k3e <http://tinyurl.com/ajw9k3e> 

Note: It is the intent of the SLP WG to publish an updated Prox-1 GB
(current version is 2003) ideally concurrent with the release of the
three updated Prox-1 Blue books. So your comments, additions,
subtractions, multiplications : ) are welcome before our April 16

Best regards, 


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