<font size=2 face="sans-serif">OK, more comments added.</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Not the end of the story I guess (i.e.
more comments may arrive)</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Gian Paolo</font>
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<td><font size=1 face="sans-serif">sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org, "Pollara,
Fabrizio \(3320\)" <fabrizio.pollara@jpl.nasa.gov>,
"Hamkins, Jon\(332B\)" <jon.hamkins@jpl.nasa.gov>,
sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org, Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int, "Andrews,
Kenneth S \(332B\)" <kenneth.s.andrews@jpl.nasa.gov></font>
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<td><font size=1 face="sans-serif">07/02/2013 11:49</font>
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<td><font size=1 face="sans-serif">RE: UC [Sls-slp] Re: Yet another draft
update to Proximity-1 Green BookJan
24 2013</font>
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<br><font size=2 color=#004080 face="Calibri">Greg / Enrico,</font>
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<br><font size=2 color=#004080 face="Calibri">I have had a quick read through
and added a few comments and changes. Speak later this afternoon / morning.</font>
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<br><font size=2 color=#004080 face="Calibri">Document attached.</font>
<br><font size=2 color=#004080 face="Calibri"> </font>
<br><font size=2 color=#004080 face="Calibri">Matt.</font>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>Kazz, Greg J (313B)<b><br>
Sent:</b> 06 February 2013 16:49<b><br>
To:</b> Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int<b><br>
Cc:</b> sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org; Pollara,Fabrizio (3320); Hamkins, Jon(332B);
sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org; Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int; Andrews, Kenneth
S (332B)<b><br>
Subject:</b> [Sls-slp] Re: Yet another draft update to Proximity-1 Green
BookJan 24 2013</font>
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<br><font size=4 face="Calibri">Enrico,</font>
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<br><font size=4 face="Calibri">Thanks for your quick response and comments.</font>
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<br><font size=4 face="Calibri">Greg</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="Calibri"><b>From: </b>"</font><a href=mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int><font size=2 color=blue face="Calibri"><u>Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</u></font></a><font size=2 face="Calibri">"
<</font><a href=mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int><font size=2 color=blue face="Calibri"><u>Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</u></font></a><font size=2 face="Calibri">><b><br>
Date: </b>Wednesday, February 6, 2013 4:55 AM<b><br>
To: </b>"Kazz, Greg J (313B)" <</font><a href=mailto:greg.j.kazz@jpl.nasa.gov><font size=2 color=blue face="Calibri"><u>greg.j.kazz@jpl.nasa.gov</u></font></a><font size=2 face="Calibri">><b><br>
Cc: </b>"Pollara, Fabrizio (3320)" <</font><a href=mailto:fabrizio.pollara@jpl.nasa.gov><font size=2 color=blue face="Calibri"><u>fabrizio.pollara@jpl.nasa.gov</u></font></a><font size=2 face="Calibri">>,
"Hamkins, Jon (332B)" <</font><a href=mailto:jon.hamkins@jpl.nasa.gov><font size=2 color=blue face="Calibri"><u>jon.hamkins@jpl.nasa.gov</u></font></a><font size=2 face="Calibri">>,
"Andrews, Kenneth S (332B)" <</font><a href=mailto:kenneth.s.andrews@jpl.nasa.gov><font size=2 color=blue face="Calibri"><u>kenneth.s.andrews@jpl.nasa.gov</u></font></a><font size=2 face="Calibri">>,
"</font><a href=mailto:Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int><font size=2 color=blue face="Calibri"><u>Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int</u></font></a><font size=2 face="Calibri">"
<</font><a href=mailto:Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int><font size=2 color=blue face="Calibri"><u>Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int</u></font></a><font size=2 face="Calibri">>,
"</font><a href="mailto:sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org"><font size=2 color=blue face="Calibri"><u>sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org</u></font></a><font size=2 face="Calibri">"
<</font><a href="mailto:sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org"><font size=2 color=blue face="Calibri"><u>sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org</u></font></a><font size=2 face="Calibri">>,
"</font><a href="mailto:sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org"><font size=2 color=blue face="Calibri"><u>sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org</u></font></a><font size=2 face="Calibri">"
<</font><a href="mailto:sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org"><font size=2 color=blue face="Calibri"><u>sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org</u></font></a><font size=2 face="Calibri">><b><br>
Subject: </b>Re: Yet another draft update to Proximity-1 Green Book Jan
24 2013</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="Arial">Greg,</font><font size=4 face="Calibri">
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I reviewed the reference document for what concerns the PL sections and
amended the following:</font><font size=4 face="Calibri"><br>
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1) Section 2.3.3</font><font size=4 face="Calibri"> <br>
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Forward/return data rates: "power of two" removed as per PL BB<br>
Return link frequency changed as needed</font><font size=4 face="Calibri">
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2) Footnote 2 </font><font size=4 face="Calibri"><br>
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"not for cross-support" added as per PL BB</font><font size=4 face="Calibri"><br>
</font><font size=2 face="Arial"><br>
3) Section 3.3.6.4</font><font size=4 face="Calibri"> <br>
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Frequency bands text aligned with PL BB</font><font size=4 face="Calibri">
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4) Section 3.3.6.5</font><font size=4 face="Calibri"> <br>
</font><font size=2 face="Arial"><br>
I have not done anything but suggested that the whole section is removed
since it does not contain any GB (or even BB) material but just a reference
to a number of BB sections (some have new names/sections numbers, not reflected
here.)</font><font size=4 face="Calibri"> <br>
</font><font size=2 face="Arial"><br>
5) Section 4.2.6</font><font size=4 face="Calibri"> <br>
</font><font size=2 face="Arial"><br>
Changed Bit to Symbol also in the title.</font><font size=4 face="Calibri">
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</font><font size=2 face="Arial"><br>
There is also a need to edit figures 4-2, 4-3, 4-4, 4-5 and 5-1 to replace
bit with symbol. I cannot edit them.</font><font size=4 face="Calibri"><br>
</font><font size=2 face="Arial"><br>
I take the opportunity of this email to invite the RFM WG colleagues to
review the document and let me know if they have additional points that
I missed.</font><font size=4 face="Calibri"><br>
</font><font size=2 face="Arial"><br>
Regards, Enrico</font><font size=4 face="Calibri"> <br>
</font><font size=2 face="Arial"><br>
P.S. For some reasons, Word marks your changes as mine ..... To avoid confusion,
I highlighted mine in yellow.</font><font size=4 face="Calibri"><br>
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<</font><a href=mailto:greg.j.kazz@jpl.nasa.gov><font size=1 color=blue face="Arial"><u>greg.j.kazz@jpl.nasa.gov</u></font></a><font size=1 face="Arial">></font>
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<td><font size=1 color=#5f5f5f face="Arial">To:</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman">
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<td><font size=1 face="Arial">"</font><a href="mailto:sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org"><font size=1 color=blue face="Arial"><u>sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org</u></font></a><font size=1 face="Arial">"
<</font><a href="mailto:sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org"><font size=1 color=blue face="Arial"><u>sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org</u></font></a><font size=1 face="Arial">>,
"Pollara, Fabrizio (3320)" <</font><a href=mailto:fabrizio.pollara@jpl.nasa.gov><font size=1 color=blue face="Arial"><u>fabrizio.pollara@jpl.nasa.gov</u></font></a><font size=1 face="Arial">>,
"Hamkins, Jon (332B)" <</font><a href=mailto:jon.hamkins@jpl.nasa.gov><font size=1 color=blue face="Arial"><u>jon.hamkins@jpl.nasa.gov</u></font></a><font size=1 face="Arial">>,
"</font><a href=mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int><font size=1 color=blue face="Arial"><u>Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</u></font></a><font size=1 face="Arial">"
<</font><a href=mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int><font size=1 color=blue face="Arial"><u>Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</u></font></a><font size=1 face="Arial">>,
"Andrews, Kenneth S (332B)" <</font><a href=mailto:kenneth.s.andrews@jpl.nasa.gov><font size=1 color=blue face="Arial"><u>kenneth.s.andrews@jpl.nasa.gov</u></font></a><font size=1 face="Arial">>,
"</font><a href=mailto:Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int><font size=1 color=blue face="Arial"><u>Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int</u></font></a><font size=1 face="Arial">"
<</font><a href=mailto:Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int><font size=1 color=blue face="Arial"><u>Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int</u></font></a><font size=1 face="Arial">></font>
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<td><font size=1 face="Arial">24/01/2013 21:04</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman">
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<td><font size=1 face="Arial">Yet another draft update to Proximity-1 Green
Book Jan 24 2013</font></table>
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All,</font><font size=4 face="Calibri"> <br>
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After receiving several new inputs for the Prox-1 GB (including the CRC-32
discussion that was submitted by ESA, other updates due to the inclusion
of the LDPC in Prox-1, etc), I have posted this updated draft version on
the CWE under:</font><font size=4 face="Calibri"> <br>
</font><font size=4 color=blue face="Calibri"><u><br>
</u></font><a href=http://tinyurl.com/ajw9k3e><font size=4 color=blue face="Calibri"><b><u>http://tinyurl.com/ajw9k3e</u></b></font></a><font size=4 face="Calibri"><br>
</font><font size=4 face="Calibri"><br>
Note: It is the intent of the SLP WG to publish an updated Prox-1 GB (current
version is 2003) ideally concurrent with the release of the three updated
Prox-1 Blue books. So your comments, additions, subtractions, multiplications
: ) are welcome before our April 16 meeting!</font><font size=4 face="Calibri">
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Best regards,</font><font size=4 face="Calibri"> <br>
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Greg</font><font size=4 face="Calibri"> </font>
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