[Sls-slp] Fw: [CESG] CESG Review of Mars Mission Protocol Profiles

[Greg Kazz]

All,

Please review the attached Green Book, which will be discussed at the 
SIS Mars Interopperability WG meeting in Washington DC on Wed March 
12.  This book draws heavily from  Proximity-1 and other link layer 
protocols so your review is appreciated.

best regards,

Greg


>Subject: Fw: [CESG] CESG Review of Mars Mission Protocol Profiles
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>Dear SLS WG chairs,
>Please have a look at this draft GB or forward it to some experts of your WG.
>Please forward rids to me by 28 Feb.
>Have a look in particular on section 4.
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>I have personnaly a concern on the content of the book as a green book:
>In the origin, GBs were supporting BBs by providing background info. Later
>on, they became some kind of preparatory books for future BBs. See for
>instance GBs on security.
>This book is yet of another category: something between magenta (recommended
>practice), GB and what we could call applications profiles. Actually, it is
>being given a GB reference but in section 1.1 it is said that it will "take
>the form of recommended practices".
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>best regards
>Jean-Luc Gerner
>TEC-ETN
>Tel: +31 71 565 4473
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>Dear Area Directors:
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>The Mars 2015 Interoperability Working Group has submitted the attached draft
>CCSDS Green Book, CCSDS 740.0-G-0.11a, Mars Mission Protocol
>Profiles--Purpose and Rationale, to the CESG for review and comment.
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>The due date for comments is Friday, February 29, 2008.
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>REVIEW INSTRUCTIONS
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>The attached review document and RID form should be forwarded to Area experts
>for review and comment.  The attached RID form must be used to record
>specific changes recommended by reviewers.  All RIDs generated as a result of
>this review should be sent via e-mail directly to the document rapporteur
>identified below.  The document rapporteur should also be advised if no RIDs
>are generated.  The document rapporteur will report the results of the
>review, including disposition of any RIDs, to the CESG after the conclusion
>of the review.
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>DOCUMENT RAPPORTEUR
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>Chris Taylor
>Chair, Mars 2015 Interoperability Working Group
>E-Mail:  Chris.Taylor at esa.int
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>Please CC the Secretariat on all correspondence relating to this review.
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>Best regards,
>Tom Gannett (See attached file: 740x0g011a[CESG Review].pdf)(See attached
>file: CESG AR-2008-02-001_RID_form.txt)
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