[MOIMS-NAV-EXEC] ADM P1.10 Review Assignments

[Ralph.Kahle at dlr.de]

Dear Alain,
Please find my review comments attached.
Have a nice weekend,
Ralph

Von: MOIMS-NAV-EXEC <moims-nav-exec-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org> Im Auftrag von Oltrogge, Daniel
Gesendet: Freitag, 25. September 2020 02:16
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Alain – Here are my CRM comments (they include a few proofreading comments as well).

Thanks,

Dan

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Dan Oltrogge
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All:



Attached are "divide & conquer" review assignments for the Attitude Data Messages (ADM) P1.10 draft. Recently Alain Lamy sent out the "changes accepted" version and the "changes tracked" version of the ADM P1.10 document, along with a blank CRM for providing your comments. Let me know if you by chance do not have these materials. Also, this is the first review for several of you, so if you have any questions about the review process, please let me know.



Per Nav WG convention, the target date to complete reviews would be 16-Sep-2020, however, it is summer vacation time so let's say have your reviews accomplished by 30-Sep-2020.



NOTE: This review is a TECHNICAL review, as opposed to a PROOFREADING review, so the emphasis is on the technical correctness of the material. You can ignore things like erroneous page numbering, etc.



When you have completed your review, please email your CRM to the WG at moims-nav-exec at mailman.ccsds.org<mailto:moims-nav-exec at mailman.ccsds.org> .



Regards,

David
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