[MOIMS-NAV-EXEC] Document Review Assignments for Draft ODM v2.39ab

Wed Feb 5 00:30:01 UTC 2020

All:

Attached are materials for the "divide & conquer" document review of the "Orbit Data Messages" Pink Book version 2.39ab. I am forwarding Dan's original email (below) with the document attachments and the CRMs he prepared. I have attached the section assignments in addition.

This is a review of technical content, not strictly proofreading.

Assignments are on average about 31.4 pages (157 pages requiring review, 5 groups of reviewers, average 31.4 pages each); two are a bit longer, two a bit shorter, one right at 31.

Please see Dan's document review instructions below. Note that you are free to review more of the document if you so wish, but please try to cover the assigned pages.

Please advise if issues arise...

In order to keep our WG work progressing in an optimized fashion, please prioritize the TDM P1.5 proofreading assignment, i.e., complete the TDM work first, then do the ODM review.

Regards, and Thanks!
David

From: MOIMS-NAV-EXEC <moims-nav-exec-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org> on behalf of "Oltrogge, Daniel" <doltrogge at agi.com>
Date: Tuesday, January 21, 2020 at 2:59 PM
To: "moims-nav-exec at mailman.ccsds.org" <moims-nav-exec at mailman.ccsds.org>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] [MOIMS-NAV-EXEC] Draft ODM v2.39ab

Colleagues –

At long last, we have assembled the new draft version of the Orbit Data Message (attached in both “clean” and “track changes” versions).

I also provide the lengthy CRM associated with this version.  You will note that a few comments have not been resolved to our satisfaction, and these have been moved to the top of the CRM document.

In our upcoming group reviews of v2.39, please start with the attached ODMv2.39_Template_CRM document to paste your comments in, first having checked to ensure that the comment you wish to make isn’t already reflected in the prior comments that have been carried over to the top of this new template.

__________________________
Dan Oltrogge
Director, Center for Space Standards and Innovation
Analytical Graphics, Incorporated
Voice: 719-482-4552   ҉   E-mail: oltrogge at agi.com<mailto:oltrogge at agi.com>

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