[Moims-ipr] Comments on EAST V2.1 Draft

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"Forrester Gary (BTAS)" <gary.forrester at btas.com>
23/11/2004 10:04 AM EST

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Subject: RE: [Moims-ipr] Comments on EAST V2.1 Draft


Steve,

Here are the latest CNES comments on the MOIMS-IPR EAST V2.1 Draft book for your
use.  Please see email string below.

Gary


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Subject: [Moims-ipr] Comments on EAST V2.1 Draft




 Gary,

The comments from the EAST Pinh Sheets Editor

ciao

nestor

Denis Minguillon <denis.minguillon at cnes.fr>
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Subject: [Moims-ipr] Comments on EAST V2.1 Draft


Hello,

Please find hereafter the last CNES comments about EAST V2.1 draft
recommandatrion :

Figure 3.19 : Compared with the proposal I made I noticed that the word
range is missing in the upper oval box, and the text "Integer literal"
is missing in the right lower box.

New figure 3.21 : the text "Constant declaration" is missing in the last
box.
The characters in the little sqare boxes are missing (":" then ":=" then
"")

Figure 3-21a : the word others is missing in the last oval box

Betwenn figure 3.10 and example 3.13 there is a reference to a page (to
point on figure 3-22). The reference doesn't seem to be OK.

Same problem just before figure3-35.

Figure 3-43a : the text "Component Value" is missing in the left box.



Once this corrected, all is OK for us with this version of the
recommandation.


Best regards,

Denis

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