[Moims-dai] Proposed text to respond to PS comments RE: Reminder of Skype call tomorrow (Tuesday)

[david at giaretta.org]

I've transferred Peter's comments into this Word document and put some
proposed responses.

Comments or alternatives welcomed.

 

Note that the Word document has text in which is coloured but note that
these are the changes we made compared to the original ISO 16363 and are not
actually tracked changes in the Word system. I have put some changes in with
tracked changes which you will find it you look for changes.

 

..David

 

From: david at giaretta.org <david at giaretta.org> 
Sent: 30 August 2021 12:01
To: MOIMS-DAI List <moims-dai at mailman.ccsds.org>
Subject: Reminder of Skype call tomorrow (Tuesday)

 

Meeting: 10:00 Tuesday (Washington DC time), 1500 UK time, 1600 Paris time.

 

If you do not receive a notification from Skype then please join it by
clicking the link:

 <https://join.skype.com/ykyu5SIPhSnD> https://join.skype.com/ykyu5SIPhSnD

 

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https://www.skype.com

 

Draft agenda:

1.	Need to respond to comments on ISO 16363 update - see attached PDF. 

Peter Shames (Approve with Conditions):   See attached pdf with 

issues flagged.  There are a number of poorly worded items and 

inaccuracies.  The security section is weak.

 

2.	OAIS-IF : 

a.	Details from previous weeks: 

                                                               i.      The
latest version of the draft GB
https://www.dropbox.com/s/ps15oqcbg9kr4sg/OAIS-IF%20Rationale%20Scenarios%20
and%20Requirements-20210829.docx?dl=0 - this has some major update proposals
for the class/interface structure in section 8.4 - comments welcome. However
the document is not yet fully consistent.

                                                             ii.
Interactions - from Steve -
https://www.dropbox.com/s/dnftuks5nvixdl0/Interactions_210608.jpg?dl=0

                                                           iii.      WHITE
BOOK FROM Steve -
https://www.dropbox.com/s/fdd8ec5cq2y574z/02_White_Book_Recommended_Standard
_OAIS-IF_Draft_191216%20v5.3%2006_ComparedCombined_04_05_210524.docx?dl=0

                                                           iv.
Component diagram from Steve -
https://www.dropbox.com/s/5fsdmfcchzcqpz5/Component_Diagram_210601.jpg?dl=0

                                                             v.      Steve
may sent out updated document/diagram

 

Regards

 

..David

 

 

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