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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-GB link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72" style='word-wrap:break-word'><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal>I’ve transferred Peter’s comments into this Word document and put some proposed responses.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Comments or alternatives welcomed.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Note that the Word document has text in which is coloured but note that these are the changes we made compared to the original ISO 16363 and are not actually tracked changes in the Word system. I have put some changes in with tracked changes which you will find it you look for changes.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>..David<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'> david@giaretta.org <david@giaretta.org> <br><b>Sent:</b> 30 August 2021 12:01<br><b>To:</b> MOIMS-DAI List <moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org><br><b>Subject:</b> Reminder of Skype call tomorrow (Tuesday)<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>Meeting: 10:00 Tuesday (Washington DC time), 1500 UK time, 1600 Paris time.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>If you do not receive a notification from Skype then please join it by clicking the link:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><a href="https://join.skype.com/ykyu5SIPhSnD"><span lang=EN-US>https://join.skype.com/ykyu5SIPhSnD</span></a><span lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>*Don't have Skype yet? Download it before you join </span><a href="https://www.skype.com"><span lang=EN-US>https://www.skype.com</span></a><span lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:16.0pt'>Draft agenda:<o:p></o:p></span></b></p><ol style='margin-top:0cm' start=1 type=1><li class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3'>Need to respond to comments on ISO 16363 update – see attached PDF. <o:p></o:p></li></ol><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:54.0pt'>Peter Shames (Approve with Conditions): See attached pdf with <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:54.0pt'>issues flagged. There are a number of poorly worded items and <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:54.0pt'>inaccuracies. The security section is weak.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:54.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></p><ol style='margin-top:0cm' start=2 type=1><li class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3'>OAIS-IF : <o:p></o:p></li><ol style='margin-top:0cm' start=1 type=a><li class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo3'>Details from previous weeks: <o:p></o:p></li></ol></ol><p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:108.0pt;text-indent:-108.0pt;mso-text-indent-alt:-9.0pt;mso-list:l0 level3 lfo3'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'><span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span>i.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]><span lang=EN-US>The latest version of the draft GB <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/ps15oqcbg9kr4sg/OAIS-IF%20Rationale%20Scenarios%20and%20Requirements-20210829.docx?dl=0">https://www.dropbox.com/s/ps15oqcbg9kr4sg/OAIS-IF%20Rationale%20Scenarios%20and%20Requirements-20210829.docx?dl=0</a> – this has some major update proposals for the class/interface structure in section 8.4 – comments welcome. However the document is not yet fully consistent.</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:108.0pt;text-indent:-108.0pt;mso-text-indent-alt:-9.0pt;mso-list:l0 level3 lfo3'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'><span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span>ii.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]>Interactions – from Steve - <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/dnftuks5nvixdl0/Interactions_210608.jpg?dl=0">https://www.dropbox.com/s/dnftuks5nvixdl0/Interactions_210608.jpg?dl=0</a><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:108.0pt;text-indent:-108.0pt;mso-text-indent-alt:-9.0pt;mso-list:l0 level3 lfo3'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'><span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span>iii.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]>WHITE BOOK FROM Steve - <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/fdd8ec5cq2y574z/02_White_Book_Recommended_Standard_OAIS-IF_Draft_191216%20v5.3%2006_ComparedCombined_04_05_210524.docx?dl=0">https://www.dropbox.com/s/fdd8ec5cq2y574z/02_White_Book_Recommended_Standard_OAIS-IF_Draft_191216%20v5.3%2006_ComparedCombined_04_05_210524.docx?dl=0</a><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:108.0pt;text-indent:-108.0pt;mso-text-indent-alt:-9.0pt;mso-list:l0 level3 lfo3'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'><span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span>iv.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]>Component diagram from Steve - <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/5fsdmfcchzcqpz5/Component_Diagram_210601.jpg?dl=0">https://www.dropbox.com/s/5fsdmfcchzcqpz5/Component_Diagram_210601.jpg?dl=0</a><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:108.0pt;text-indent:-108.0pt;mso-text-indent-alt:-9.0pt;mso-list:l0 level3 lfo3'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'><span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span>v.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]>Steve may sent out updated document/diagram<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Regards<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>..David<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div></body></html>