[Moims-dai] Marked up version of OAIS Section 6.1.5 - OO-IO Text

Mon Sep 10 16:42:21 UTC 2018

Hi Mark

As I understand it, Eld argues that the OO-IO is useful terminology while you think it is unnecessary. I hope you can both be on the call tomorrow.

My attitude is that the OO-IO terminology 

1.	is potentially useful 
2.	does no harm and does not affect conformance
3.	has the benefit of enabling one to say that if an OAIS does rely on another organisation to provide a service, it is advantageous that the information the 2nd organisation needs to provide that service is preserved in the best possible way i.e. that 2nd organisation is itself an OAIS.

Of course we can argue about all those points!

..David

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Subject: Re: [Moims-dai] Marked up version of OAIS Section 6.1.5 - OO-IO Text

Please see the attached text with my comments. Hopefully I have commented on the correct text this time. 😀 I will also post this text as an attachment to SC 135 on the review.oais.info <http://review.oais.info>  site. 

Mark Conrad
NARA Information Services

Systems Engineering Division (IT)
The National Archives and Records Administration
Erma Ora Byrd Conference and Learning Center
Building 494, Room 225
610 State Route 956
Rocket Center, WV  26726

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On Wed, Sep 5, 2018 at 2:02 PM, Mark Conrad <mark.conrad at nara.gov <mailto:mark.conrad at nara.gov> > wrote:

Thanks, John. I will prepare comments accordingly. Thanks, Eld, for pointing out the discrepancy.

Mark

Mark Conrad
NARA Information Services

Systems Engineering Division (IT)
The National Archives and Records Administration
Erma Ora Byrd Conference and Learning Center
Building 494, Room 225
610 State Route 956
Rocket Center, WV  26726

Phone: 304-726-7820
Fax: 304-726-7802
Email: mark.conrad at nara.gov <mailto:mark.conrad at nara.gov>  

On Wed, Sep 5, 2018 at 1:43 PM, John Garrett <garrett at his.com <mailto:garrett at his.com> > wrote:

Hi,

Sorry, this seems to be my mistake.

It appears as if I did not get the original suggested update into the draft and did not get the subsequent intermediate suggestion into the draft.  Probably best at this point to take Eld’s content as the base for further comments.

Peace and joy,

-JOhn

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Subject: Re: [Moims-dai] Marked up version of OAIS Section 6.1.5 - OO-IO Text

Hi Eld,

The text I commented on is from John's Word document with the current state of the OAIS document dated 2018-08-21.

John,

Which document should I be commenting on for Section 6.1.5. - that section from your document dated 2018-08-21 or the document that Eld cites in her email message,  <http://review.oais.info/attachment.cgi?id=42> Section 6.1.5 10th of July 2018 ( <http://review.oais.info/attachment.cgi?id=42> http://review.oais.info/attachment.cgi?id=42)?

Mark

Mark Conrad
NARA Information Services

Systems Engineering Division (IT)
The National Archives and Records Administration
Erma Ora Byrd Conference and Learning Center
Building 494, Room 225
610 State Route 956
Rocket Center, WV  26726

Phone: 304-726-7820
Fax: 304-726-7802
Email: mark.conrad at nara.gov <mailto:mark.conrad at nara.gov>  

On Wed, Sep 5, 2018 at 3:58 AM, Eld Zierau <elzi at kb.dk <mailto:elzi at kb.dk> > wrote:

Hi 

I think there has been a misunderstanding somewhere, since the version you commented Mark is a word document from an old version.

The version discussed on 14th of August is:  <http://review.oais.info/attachment.cgi?id=42> Section 6.1.5 10th of July 2018 (http://review.oais.info/attachment.cgi?id=42) 

It was also noted that terms like Functional Entity … was to be changed to lower case and the references in the end should be removed.

Best regards, Eld

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Subject: [Moims-dai] Marked up version of OAIS Section 6.1.5 - OO-IO Text

Please see the attached text with my comments. I have also posted this text as an attachment to SC 135 on the review.oais.info <http://review.oais.info>  site.

Mark Conrad
NARA Information Services

Systems Engineering Division (IT)
The National Archives and Records Administration
Erma Ora Byrd Conference and Learning Center
Building 494, Room 225
610 State Route 956
Rocket Center, WV  26726

Phone: 304-726-7820
Fax: 304-726-7802
Email: mark.conrad at nara.gov <mailto:mark.conrad at nara.gov>  

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