[Moims-dai] Marked up version of OAIS Section 6.1.5 - OO-IO Text

[Mark Conrad]

Please see the attached text with my comments. Hopefully I have commented
on the correct text this time. 😀 I will also post this text as an
attachment to SC 135 on the review.oais.info site.

Mark Conrad
NARA Information Services
Systems Engineering Division (IT)
The National Archives and Records Administration
Erma Ora Byrd Conference and Learning Center
Building 494, Room 225
610 State Route 956
Rocket Center, WV  26726

Phone: 304-726-7820
Fax: 304-726-7802
Email: mark.conrad at nara.gov


On Wed, Sep 5, 2018 at 2:02 PM, Mark Conrad <mark.conrad at nara.gov> wrote:

> Thanks, John. I will prepare comments accordingly. Thanks, Eld, for
> pointing out the discrepancy.
>
> Mark
>
> Mark Conrad
> NARA Information Services
> Systems Engineering Division (IT)
> The National Archives and Records Administration
> Erma Ora Byrd Conference and Learning Center
> Building 494, Room 225
> 610 State Route 956
> Rocket Center, WV  26726
>
> Phone: 304-726-7820
> Fax: 304-726-7802
> Email: mark.conrad at nara.gov
>
>
> On Wed, Sep 5, 2018 at 1:43 PM, John Garrett <garrett at his.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi,
>>
>>
>>
>> Sorry, this seems to be my mistake.
>>
>> It appears as if I did not get the original suggested update into the
>> draft and did not get the subsequent intermediate suggestion into the
>> draft.  Probably best at this point to take Eld’s content as the base for
>> further comments.
>>
>>
>>
>> Peace and joy,
>>
>> -JOhn
>>
>>
>>
>> *From:* MOIMS-DAI [mailto:moims-dai-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org] *On
>> Behalf Of *Mark Conrad
>> *Sent:* Wednesday, September 5, 2018 9:07 AM
>> *To:* MOIMS-Data Archive Interoperability <moims-dai at mailman.ccsds.org>
>> *Subject:* Re: [Moims-dai] Marked up version of OAIS Section 6.1.5 -
>> OO-IO Text
>>
>>
>>
>> Hi Eld,
>>
>>
>>
>> The text I commented on is from John's Word document with the current
>> state of the OAIS document dated 2018-08-21.
>>
>>
>>
>> John,
>>
>>
>>
>> Which document should I be commenting on for Section 6.1.5. - that
>> section from your document dated 2018-08-21 or the document that Eld cites
>> in her email message, *Section 6.1.5 10th of July 2018*
>> <http://review.oais.info/attachment.cgi?id=42> (http://review.oais.info/
>> attachment.cgi?id=42)?
>>
>>
>>
>> Mark
>>
>>
>> Mark Conrad
>> NARA Information Services
>>
>> Systems Engineering Division (IT)
>> The National Archives and Records Administration
>> Erma Ora Byrd Conference and Learning Center
>> Building 494, Room 225
>> 610 State Route 956
>> Rocket Center, WV  26726
>>
>> Phone: 304-726-7820
>> Fax: 304-726-7802
>> Email: mark.conrad at nara.gov
>>
>>
>>
>> On Wed, Sep 5, 2018 at 3:58 AM, Eld Zierau <elzi at kb.dk> wrote:
>>
>> Hi
>>
>> I think there has been a misunderstanding somewhere, since the version
>> you commented Mark is a word document *from an old version*.
>>
>> The version discussed on 14th of August is: *Section 6.1.5 10th of July
>> 2018* <http://review.oais.info/attachment.cgi?id=42> (
>> http://review.oais.info/attachment.cgi?id=42)
>>
>> It was also noted that terms like Functional Entity … was to be changed
>> to lower case and the references in the end should be removed.
>>
>> Best regards, Eld
>>
>>
>>
>> *From:* MOIMS-DAI <moims-dai-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org> *On Behalf Of *Mark
>> Conrad
>> *Sent:* Tuesday, September 4, 2018 5:29 PM
>> *To:* MOIMS-Data Archive Ingestion <moims-dai at mailman.ccsds.org>
>> *Subject:* [Moims-dai] Marked up version of OAIS Section 6.1.5 - OO-IO
>> Text
>>
>>
>>
>> Please see the attached text with my comments. I have also posted this
>> text as an attachment to SC 135 on the review.oais.info site.
>>
>>
>> Mark Conrad
>> NARA Information Services
>>
>> Systems Engineering Division (IT)
>> The National Archives and Records Administration
>> Erma Ora Byrd Conference and Learning Center
>> Building 494, Room 225
>> 610 State Route 956
>> Rocket Center, WV  26726
>>
>> Phone: 304-726-7820
>> Fax: 304-726-7802
>> Email: mark.conrad at nara.gov
>>
>>
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