[Moims-dai] Marked up version of OAIS Section 6.1.5 - OO-IO Text

[Mark Conrad]

Hi Eld,

The text I commented on is from John's Word document with the current state
of the OAIS document dated 2018-08-21.

John,

Which document should I be commenting on for Section 6.1.5. - that section
from your document dated 2018-08-21 or the document that Eld cites in her
email message, *Section 6.1.5 10th of July 2018*
<http://review.oais.info/attachment.cgi?id=42> (http://review.oais.info/
attachment.cgi?id=42)?

Mark

Mark Conrad
NARA Information Services
Systems Engineering Division (IT)
The National Archives and Records Administration
Erma Ora Byrd Conference and Learning Center
Building 494, Room 225
610 State Route 956
Rocket Center, WV  26726

Phone: 304-726-7820
Fax: 304-726-7802
Email: mark.conrad at nara.gov


On Wed, Sep 5, 2018 at 3:58 AM, Eld Zierau <elzi at kb.dk> wrote:

> Hi
>
> I think there has been a misunderstanding somewhere, since the version you
> commented Mark is a word document *from an old version*.
>
> The version discussed on 14th of August is: *Section 6.1.5 10th of July
> 2018* <http://review.oais.info/attachment.cgi?id=42> (
> http://review.oais.info/attachment.cgi?id=42)
>
> It was also noted that terms like Functional Entity … was to be changed to
> lower case and the references in the end should be removed.
>
> Best regards, Eld
>
>
>
> *From:* MOIMS-DAI <moims-dai-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org> *On Behalf Of *Mark
> Conrad
> *Sent:* Tuesday, September 4, 2018 5:29 PM
> *To:* MOIMS-Data Archive Ingestion <moims-dai at mailman.ccsds.org>
> *Subject:* [Moims-dai] Marked up version of OAIS Section 6.1.5 - OO-IO
> Text
>
>
>
> Please see the attached text with my comments. I have also posted this
> text as an attachment to SC 135 on the review.oais.info site.
>
>
> Mark Conrad
> NARA Information Services
>
> Systems Engineering Division (IT)
> The National Archives and Records Administration
> Erma Ora Byrd Conference and Learning Center
> Building 494, Room 225
> 610 State Route 956
> Rocket Center, WV  26726
>
> Phone: 304-726-7820
> Fax: 304-726-7802
> Email: mark.conrad at nara.gov
>
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