Fw: [Css-csts] Framework - Return Services including ASN.1
Yves.Doat at esa.int
Yves.Doat at esa.int
Sat Sep 8 10:39:04 EDT 2012
Dear Sylvain,
Thank you for your comments.
I implemented them all, apart from the last two:
The two diagnostics have been merged and the text reads:
"a) ‘unknown Functional Resource Identifier’ — one or more Functional Resource
Identifier contained in the list-of-events are unknown to the Service
Provider (see 4.8.4.1.2.2). The list of unknown Functional Resource
Identifiers shall be returned with the diagnostic;"
Please let me know if that's Ok
Best regards
Yves
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From: Sylvain Gully <Sylvain.Gully at dlr.de>
To: <Margherita.di.Giulio at esa.int>, Doat Yves <Yves.Doat at esa.int>
Date: 06/08/2012 09:06
Subject: Re: Fw: [Css-csts] Framework - Return Services including ASN.1
Dear Margherita, dear Yves,
I had a detailled look at the book and here are the typo, missing
references or better wording I had some problem with. Otherwise I found
the book good and ok to understand.
- p.4-14: typo in point b) at begin of page "Rather than deleting
individual data units end event notifications" replace with "Rather than
deleting individual data units and event notifications"
- p.4-40: typo in list of Diagnostic values: the last 3 values are
labelled a) b) c) -> should be e) f) g)
- p.4-40: chapter 4.7.4.1.3.2: the Diagnostic extension defined as
"CrStartDiagnosticExt" refers to chapter D3.9. But this reference
doesn't exit in chapter D3.9, only "crStartNegReturnExt".
"CrStartDiagnosticExt" is also not define in the ASN1 text file
- p.4-41: chapter 4.7.4.2.2.1: the type defined
"CyclicReportTransferDataExt" refers to chapter D3.9. But this reference
doesn't exit in chapter D3.9, only "crTransferDataInvocDataExt".
"CyclicReportTransferDataExt" is also not define in the ASN1 text file
- p.4-41: chapter 4.7.4.2.2.2: same as chapter 4.7.4.2.2.1
- p.4-48: chapter 4.8.4.1.3: point a) Should not "The list of unknown
Event Names" be replaced by "The list of Event names corresponding to
the unknow Functional Ressource Type" -> I had some problem to
understand the wording there.
- p.4-48: chapter 4.8.4.1.3: point b) should not "The list of unknown
Event Names" be replaced by "The list of Event names corresponding to
the unknow Functional Ressource Instance" -> I had some problem to
understand the wording there.
Regards,
Sylvain
PS: I'm now 3 weeks in Holiday
Margherita.di.Giulio at esa.int schrieb:
> Dear W.G. Members,
> in his e-mail from 9th July Yves announced the finalisation of the
> CSTS Specification Framework update (for Return Services only) ,
> The book reflects the outcome of the brainstorming between John
> Pietras and ESA (Yves, Wolfgang and myself).
>
> I would like to invite all other W.G. and Area members to give a
> final look at the book, before this will be submitted to the CCSDS
> Secretariat (via the Area Director).
>
> Please let me have your comments by 15 August.
> Kind regards,
> Margherita
>
> -------------------------------------------------------------
> Margherita di Giulio
> Ground Station Back-end Section (HSO-GIB)
> European Space Agency ESA/ESOC
> Robert-Bosch-Str. 5
> D-64293 Darmstadt - Germany
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> ----- Forwarded by Margherita di Giulio/esoc/ESA on 12/07/2012 12:06
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> From: Yves.Doat at esa.int
> To: css-csts at mailman.ccsds.org
> Date: 09/07/2012 08:56
> Subject: [Css-csts] Framework - Return Services including ASN.1
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> Dear all,
>
> I just uploaded to the CWE (CWE-Private/CSTS Framework and Concept) the
> following 2 documents:
> 921x1r2[Draft 201207] - Return Services: Specifications with updated
> ASN.1
> 921x1r2[Draft 201207] - ASN.1: ASN.1 text file
>
> I checked the syntax of the ASN.1 with a parser.
>
> In my opinion, the book can be sent to Secretariat for processing.
>
> Best regards
>
> Yves
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