[CESG] SEA SAWG proposed edits to the SOIS document, CCSDS 870.10-Y-1, MO Services and SOIS Electronic Data Sheets

[Sam Cooper]

Hi Peter,

Yes, sorry, attached (hopefully).

Cheers,
Sam.




On 21/02/2019 17:16, Shames, Peter M (312B) wrote:
>
> Hi Sam,
>
> This came today, but there was no attachment …
>
> Thanks, Peter
>
> *From: *Sam Cooper <sam at brightascension.com>
> *Date: *Thursday, February 21, 2019 at 12:53 AM
> *To: *Peter Shames <Peter.M.Shames at jpl.nasa.gov>, Mario Merri 
> <Mario.Merri at esa.int>, "Mehran.Sarkarati at esa.int" 
> <Mehran.Sarkarati at esa.int>, Roger Thompson 
> <roger.s.thompson at btinternet.com>, Dan Smith 
> <danford.s.smith at nasa.gov>, "Wilmot, Jonathan J. (GSFC-5820)" 
> <Jonathan.J.Wilmot at NASA.gov>, "Rakow, Glenn P. (GSFC-5610)" 
> <glenn.p.rakow at nasa.gov>, Richard Melvin <Richard.Melvin at scisys.co.uk>
> *Cc: *SEA-SA <sea-sa at mailman.ccsds.org>, CCSDS Engineering Steering 
> Group - CESG Exec <cesg at mailman.ccsds.org>
> *Subject: *Re: SEA SAWG proposed edits to the SOIS document, CCSDS 
> 870.10-Y-1, MO Services and SOIS Electronic Data Sheets
>
> Sending again...
>
>
> On 13/02/2019 09:37, Sam Cooper wrote:
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>     HI Peter,
>
>     Thank you fro taking the time to lead this activity, I've reviewed
>     the red marked version of the document (I hope that was the
>     correct one to review).
>
>     I've attached my commented and change tracked version for you, it
>     seems like a real step forward and only gets a little confused in
>     section 5 (easily rectified I think) and a little "personal" in
>     section 6.
>
>     Best regards,
>     Sam.
>
>     On 09/02/2019 01:04, Shames, Peter M (312B) wrote:
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>         Dear All,
>
>         As reported during the CESG Telecon on 7 Feb 2019, the Systems
>         Engineering Area (SEA), using resources of the Systems
>         Architecture Working Group (SAWG), has completed a review of
>         the SOIS document, CCSDS 870.10-Y-1, MO Services and SOIS
>         Electronic Data Sheets and proposed a set of updates to
>         resolve differences of opinion between SOIS and MOIMS and
>         clarify the relationships.  This result was derived using
>         meeting and email discussions within the SAWG and particularly
>         with representatives of the two different points of view
>         (Roger Thompson and Ramon Krosley) and the original author of
>         the document (Richard Melvin). Before sending this document
>         out more widely these parties were polled and they concurred
>         in this release, with two minor issues noted.  Those issues
>         have been dealt with in this version.
>
>         Three files are attached:
>
>         1)A "clean" version with changes accepted, but revised text
>         left in red
>
>         2)A raw version with all of the tracked changes visible
>
>         3)A spreadsheet extracted from the marked up PDF files, along
>         with the audit trail of discussions leading to resolution
>
>         Since this is, in effect, a cross-area "working group" of
>         sorts I would like to ask all of those who have a stake in
>         this to review the document and provide feedback in two weeks,
>         by 22 Feb 2019.  I'd like to use a consensus process over
>         email and am hoping we can wrap this up quickly.  We will
>         still need to process the final result through the CESG for
>         approval to publish.
>
>         Thanks, Peter
>
>
>

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