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Hi Peter,<br>
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Yes, sorry, attached (hopefully).<br>
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Cheers,<br>
Sam.<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 21/02/2019 17:16, Shames, Peter M
(312B) wrote:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Hi Sam,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">This came
today, but there was no attachment …<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thanks,
Peter<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><b><span
style="color:black">From: </span>
</b><span style="color:black">Sam Cooper
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:sam@brightascension.com"><sam@brightascension.com></a><br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday, February 21, 2019 at 12:53 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>Peter Shames
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:Peter.M.Shames@jpl.nasa.gov"><Peter.M.Shames@jpl.nasa.gov></a>, Mario Merri
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int"><Mario.Merri@esa.int></a>, <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:Mehran.Sarkarati@esa.int">"Mehran.Sarkarati@esa.int"</a>
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:Mehran.Sarkarati@esa.int"><Mehran.Sarkarati@esa.int></a>, Roger Thompson
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:roger.s.thompson@btinternet.com"><roger.s.thompson@btinternet.com></a>, Dan Smith
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:danford.s.smith@nasa.gov"><danford.s.smith@nasa.gov></a>, "Wilmot, Jonathan J.
(GSFC-5820)" <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:Jonathan.J.Wilmot@NASA.gov"><Jonathan.J.Wilmot@NASA.gov></a>, "Rakow,
Glenn P. (GSFC-5610)" <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:glenn.p.rakow@nasa.gov"><glenn.p.rakow@nasa.gov></a>,
Richard Melvin <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:Richard.Melvin@scisys.co.uk"><Richard.Melvin@scisys.co.uk></a><br>
<b>Cc: </b>SEA-SA <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:sea-sa@mailman.ccsds.org"><sea-sa@mailman.ccsds.org></a>, CCSDS
Engineering Steering Group - CESG Exec
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:cesg@mailman.ccsds.org"><cesg@mailman.ccsds.org></a><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: SEA SAWG proposed edits to the SOIS
document, CCSDS 870.10-Y-1, MO Services and SOIS
Electronic Data Sheets<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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again...<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in">On 13/02/2019
09:37, Sam Cooper wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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Peter,<br>
<br>
Thank you fro taking the time to lead this activity, I've
reviewed the red marked version of the document (I hope that
was the correct one to review).<br>
<br>
I've attached my commented and change tracked version for
you, it seems like a real step forward and only gets a
little confused in section 5 (easily rectified I think) and
a little "personal" in section 6.<br>
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Best regards,<br>
Sam.<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in">On 09/02/2019
01:04, Shames, Peter M (312B) wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt">As reported during the CESG
Telecon on 7 Feb 2019, the Systems Engineering Area
(SEA), using resources of the Systems Architecture
Working Group (SAWG), has completed a review of the SOIS
document, CCSDS 870.10-Y-1, MO Services and SOIS
Electronic Data Sheets and proposed a set of updates to
resolve differences of opinion between SOIS and MOIMS
and clarify the relationships. This result was derived
using meeting and email discussions within the SAWG and
particularly with representatives of the two different
points of view (Roger Thompson and Ramon Krosley) and
the original author of the document (Richard Melvin).
Before sending this document out more widely these
parties were polled and they concurred in this release,
with two minor issues noted. Those issues have been
dealt with in this version.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt">Three files are attached:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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accepted, but revised text left in
<span style="color:red">red</span></span> <o:p></o:p></p>
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tracked changes visible</span>
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style="font-size:11.0pt">A spreadsheet extracted from
the marked up PDF files, along with the audit trail of
discussions leading to resolution</span>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt">Since this is, in effect, a
cross-area "working group" of sorts I would like to ask
all of those who have a stake in this to review the
document and provide feedback in two weeks, by 22 Feb
2019. I'd like to use a consensus process over email
and am hoping we can wrap this up quickly. We will
still need to process the final result through the CESG
for approval to publish.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt">Thanks, Peter</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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