[CESG] Last version of "CESG Report to CMC" template for discussion at next webex

[Shames, Peter M (312B)]

Ciao Nestor,

I asked our JPL team for feedback.  A specific set of notes are included in these mark-ups.  Overall this template is acceptable, if not startling, but some of the WG chairs had particular comments.

-       I would put the Area Exec Summary first and not last.
-          Need some sort of template (or sections of this one) that focusses on the WG, not just the area.  I guess this is pg 6 in the attached.  Is there a format or expected content for the second page per WG?
-          Preferably the WG sections would be used by the WG and then the AD should be able to just do a copy / paste of the whole WG slide(s).  Pg 6 does this.
-       Pg 7 seems like a not very useful cut / paste activity for the AD.  Is there a specific purpose for this slide?
-          Some of the fonts and colors are objectionable.  No one likes the magenta text nor the yellow / green / gray bars.  Are these intended to be mandatory?
-          The whole format could be a lot cleaner, it is still very cluttered.  Maybe that is a "frill", but this looks old fashioned.

Thanks, Peter



From: CESG <cesg-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org> on behalf of Nestor Peccia <Nestor.Peccia at esa.int>
Date: Tuesday, August 30, 2016 at 2:35 AM
To: CCSDS Engineering Steering Group - CESG Exec <cesg at mailman.ccsds.org>
Subject: [CESG] Last version of "CESG Report to CMC" template for discussion at next webex

Dear all,

Please find attached a new update of the template to be discussed at our next webex on 7th Sept 2016

Your comments prior to the venue are very welcome. Once they are agreed , we will tune the "look and feel" and final format



ciao
nestor

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