[CESG] LIF Proposed Template v1

[Barkley, Erik J (US 3970)]

Hi Amber,

I tend to agree with Peter and Tim regarding slide 3 and would suggest shrinking the space used by graphic.  And perhaps a graphic more suggestive of lunar communications?  I asked Bing/DALL.E 3 to produce an image relating to lunar comm and it produced the attached.  For what it is worth.

-Erik

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Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [CESG] LIF Proposed Template v1

Hi Amber,

I like the template, at least pages 1 & 2.  As Tim noted pg 3, which is what would carry most of the presentation text takes up a lot of space with that dark field.

I would not chose that page template for text, but then, I have often been told I have too many words as it is.  Maybe the discipline would do me good.

I did fix two minor typos on pg two:  “Dr. Diane” and “Vint Cerf”.

Thanks, Peter


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Subject: [EXTERNAL] [CESG] LIF Proposed Template v1
Hi All,

Attached is an idea for a Panel 2-3 template. Please let me know if this helpful, or if you’d prefer to work with what we have already!

Thank you.

Amber

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