[cssm] Action Item: Perform initial edit on GB to match agreed upon out-line and eliminate what is now deemed superflous material and provide to H. Kelliher

[Barkley, Erik J (US 3970)]

Hello Marcin,

I took a quick look at the updated document.  I like it.  In reference to the old-content book, it’s almost a 53% reduction in page count (from 134 to 63).  And yet I think it conveys the concepts needed for the reader (admittedly just on my brief review). I think this is off to a very good start.

Best regards,
-Erik

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Subject: [EXTERNAL] [cssm] Action Item: Perform initial edit on GB to match agreed upon out-line and eliminate what is now deemed superflous material and provide to H. Kelliher

Dear Hugh,

I just did an initial edit on the G-2. You can find two files on CWE:

Cleaned up comments but old content:
https://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE%20Private/Book%20Production/Green/Concept%20Book/Green-2/Future%20Revision/902x0w2_CSSM_Concept_20240621-clean-old-content.doc?d=w16388bad60e2453c8b113cd720fd898c<https://urldefense.us/v3/__https:/cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE*20Private/Book*20Production/Green/Concept*20Book/Green-2/Future*20Revision/902x0w2_CSSM_Concept_20240621-clean-old-content.doc?d=w16388bad60e2453c8b113cd720fd898c__;JSUlJQ!!PvBDto6Hs4WbVuu7!PQNBAGulB7xoDZHRkdSIiC53lx8fgMsUu43pjYuHvGyYBaGzLXHOQKfTt76SWI3OgAULaeIBHDErCGww8w9hy2tOsQ$>

and the new edited book for staring new life of G-2:
https://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE%20Private/Book%20Production/Green/Concept%20Book/Green-2/Future%20Revision/902x0w2_CSSM_Concept_20240621.doc?d=w6083cd22059b4dd8af1b763a405f23ed<https://urldefense.us/v3/__https:/cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE*20Private/Book*20Production/Green/Concept*20Book/Green-2/Future*20Revision/902x0w2_CSSM_Concept_20240621.doc?d=w6083cd22059b4dd8af1b763a405f23ed__;JSUlJQ!!PvBDto6Hs4WbVuu7!PQNBAGulB7xoDZHRkdSIiC53lx8fgMsUu43pjYuHvGyYBaGzLXHOQKfTt76SWI3OgAULaeIBHDErCGww8w_bzjyagg$>

There is a lot to do, and I will gladly help (there are few sections where I definitely see myself as actionee).

@all: you are happily invited to have a look and provide valuable inputs 😊.

Cheers
Marcin
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