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<p class="MsoNormal">Hello Marcin,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I took a quick look at the updated document. I like it. In reference to the old-content book, it’s almost a 53% reduction in page count (from 134 to 63). And yet I think it conveys the concepts needed for the reader (admittedly just
on my brief review). I think this is off to a very good start. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">-Erik<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> SMWG <smwg-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org> <b>On Behalf Of
</b>Marcin Gnat via SMWG<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, June 21, 2024 5:53<br>
<b>To:</b> hugh.kelliher@spaceconnexions.com<br>
<b>Cc:</b> smwg@mailman.ccsds.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [EXTERNAL] [cssm] Action Item: Perform initial edit on GB to match agreed upon out-line and eliminate what is now deemed superflous material and provide to H. Kelliher<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><a name="Gruß"></a><span lang="DE">Dear Hugh,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="DE"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">I just did an initial edit on the G-2. You can find two files on CWE:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Cleaned up comments but old content:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><a href="https://urldefense.us/v3/__https:/cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE*20Private/Book*20Production/Green/Concept*20Book/Green-2/Future*20Revision/902x0w2_CSSM_Concept_20240621-clean-old-content.doc?d=w16388bad60e2453c8b113cd720fd898c__;JSUlJQ!!PvBDto6Hs4WbVuu7!PQNBAGulB7xoDZHRkdSIiC53lx8fgMsUu43pjYuHvGyYBaGzLXHOQKfTt76SWI3OgAULaeIBHDErCGww8w9hy2tOsQ$">https://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE%20Private/Book%20Production/Green/Concept%20Book/Green-2/Future%20Revision/902x0w2_CSSM_Concept_20240621-clean-old-content.doc?d=w16388bad60e2453c8b113cd720fd898c</a><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">and the new edited book for staring new life of G-2:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><a href="https://urldefense.us/v3/__https:/cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE*20Private/Book*20Production/Green/Concept*20Book/Green-2/Future*20Revision/902x0w2_CSSM_Concept_20240621.doc?d=w6083cd22059b4dd8af1b763a405f23ed__;JSUlJQ!!PvBDto6Hs4WbVuu7!PQNBAGulB7xoDZHRkdSIiC53lx8fgMsUu43pjYuHvGyYBaGzLXHOQKfTt76SWI3OgAULaeIBHDErCGww8w_bzjyagg$">https://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE%20Private/Book%20Production/Green/Concept%20Book/Green-2/Future%20Revision/902x0w2_CSSM_Concept_20240621.doc?d=w6083cd22059b4dd8af1b763a405f23ed</a><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">There is a lot to do, and I will gladly help (there are few sections where I definitely see myself as actionee).<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">@all: you are happily invited to have a look and provide valuable inputs
<span style="font-family:"Segoe UI Emoji",sans-serif">😊</span>.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Cheers<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Marcin<o:p></o:p></p>
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