[Sls-slp] FW: [EXTERNAL] Action to isolate the changes introduced to clarify the matter of systematic retransmission in 232.0-B and 232.1-B

[Kazz, Greg J (US 312B)]

Dear SLP WG,

Below please find the results of Gian Paolo’s action item from today’s SLP WG meeting, i.e., “Gian Paolo will take the COP-1 and TC SDLP proposed changes discussed at the meeting today and integrate those changes into pink sheets for the COP-1 as well as the TC SDLP blue books. These pink sheets will facilitate the review by the SLP WG off-line.”

I did a check of the attached pdf file with the original “Retransmission Wording” file and I found that he made all of the corrections to the TC SDLP document.
Please let me know if you have any comments or concerns.

Best regards,
Greg Kazz
Chair SLP WG


From: "Gian.Paolo.Calzolari at esa.int" <Gian.Paolo.Calzolari at esa.int>
Date: Tuesday, October 27, 2020 at 10:51 AM
To: "Kazz, Greg J (US 312B)" <greg.j.kazz at jpl.nasa.gov>, "Matthew Cosby (matt.cosby at goonhilly.org)" <matt.cosby at goonhilly.org>, "Gilles.Moury at cnes.fr" <Gilles.Moury at cnes.fr>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] Action to isolate the changes introduced to clarify the matter of systematic retransmission in 232.0-B and 232.1-B

Dear All,
        about the action to isolate the changes introduced to clarify the matter of systematic retransmission, I compared the meeting file (attached) with the books in force and actually the changes shown in  meeting file are already all covered by COP-1 book in force (reference to USLP was already added by corrigendum) available at https://public.ccsds.org/Pubs/232x1b2e2c1.pdf<https://urldefense.us/v3/__https:/public.ccsds.org/Pubs/232x1b2e2c1.pdf__;!!PvBDto6Hs4WbVuu7!aGnYsFrw2ELOqXXuUs6sC934FVVliiBdqs82gvKds-im1gktksWPjiqdJOoaqrDSxoEykOoa$> .

The result of the comparison with the TC SDLP book is in the attached winword file.
Moreover I converted the file to pdf deleting all unchanged pages.
If I did it correctly, the result in in the attached 4-pages pdf file.

Please have a look checking for possible mistakes.
If OK, the new files can be exposed to the WG.

Regards

Gian Paolo




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