[Sls-slp] Re: Towards Issue 3 of CCSDS 130.0-G Overview of Space Communications Protocols - Green Book

[Kazz, Greg J (312G)]

G.P.,

Sorry if I caused you some unnecessary work, but the correct and current file to review is the latest one I put on the CWE I.e.,

The new filename is 130x0g2_master_May7_2013.

For example, it addressed your concerns on Figure 4-5 as well.

URL is:

http://tinyurl.com/k2p9x7p

Please address all of your comments on the file listed above.

Thanks!

Greg

From: "Gian.Paolo.Calzolari at esa.int<mailto:Gian.Paolo.Calzolari at esa.int>" <Gian.Paolo.Calzolari at esa.int<mailto:Gian.Paolo.Calzolari at esa.int>>
Date: Thursday, December 5, 2013 2:37 AM
To: "Kazz, Greg J (313B)" <greg.j.kazz at jpl.nasa.gov<mailto:greg.j.kazz at jpl.nasa.gov>>, Tom Gannett <tomg at aiaa.org<mailto:tomg at aiaa.org>>
Subject: Towards Issue 3 of CCSDS 130.0-G Overview of Space Communications Protocols - Green Book

Greg,
        here attached a commented version of the last editing of "CCSDS 130.0-G Overview of Space Communications Protocols - Green Book" you sent yesterday.
I renamed the file also to show that actually this is the editing towards issue 3,
I also attach a ppt file to explain comments to Figure 4-5.

There are some unresolved comments as well as some remarks to be finalized before publication.
Please have a look such that we can fix/close as many as possible.

I think we may need also a chat with Massimo for the table on codes, but it may be better to clean up the document before we do that.

Tom,
        some comments are addressed to you but I guess they can be considered not urgent.

Thank you and best regards

Gian Paolo





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