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<div>Sorry if I caused you some unnecessary work, but the correct and current file to review is the latest one I put on the CWE I.e., </div>
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<div><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: small; font-family: 'Default Sans Serif', Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; ">The new filename is </span><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: small; font-family: 'Default Sans Serif', Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; ">130x0g2_<i>master_</i><span style="font-style: italic; ">May7_</span>2013.
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<div><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: small; font-family: 'Default Sans Serif', Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; ">For example, it addressed your concerns on Figure 4-5 as well.</span></div>
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<div><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: small; font-family: 'Default Sans Serif', Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; "><b>Please address all of your comments on the file listed above.</b></span></div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>"<a href="mailto:Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int">Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int</a>" <<a href="mailto:Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int">Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Thursday, December 5, 2013 2:37 AM<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>"Kazz, Greg J (313B)" <<a href="mailto:greg.j.kazz@jpl.nasa.gov">greg.j.kazz@jpl.nasa.gov</a>>, Tom Gannett <<a href="mailto:tomg@aiaa.org">tomg@aiaa.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>Towards Issue 3 of CCSDS 130.0-G Overview of Space Communications Protocols - Green Book<br>
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<div><font size="2" face="sans-serif">Greg, </font><br>
<font size="2" face="sans-serif"> here attached a commented version of the last editing of "CCSDS 130.0-G Overview of Space Communications Protocols - Green Book" you sent yesterday.</font><br>
<font size="2" face="sans-serif">I renamed the file also to show that actually this is the editing towards issue 3,</font><br>
<font size="2" face="sans-serif">I also attach a ppt file to explain comments to Figure 4-5.</font><br>
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<font size="2" face="sans-serif">There are some unresolved comments as well as some remarks to be finalized before publication.</font><br>
<font size="2" face="sans-serif">Please have a look such that we can fix/close as many as possible.</font><br>
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<font size="2" face="sans-serif">I think we may need also a chat with Massimo for the table on codes, but it may be better to clean up the document before we do that.</font><br>
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<font size="2" face="sans-serif">Tom,</font> <br>
<font size="2" face="sans-serif"> some comments are addressed to you but I guess they can be considered not urgent.</font><br>
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<font size="2" face="sans-serif">Thank you and best regards</font> <br>
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<font size="2" face="sans-serif">Gian Paolo</font> <br>
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