[Sls-slp] Fw: SLP WG review of CCSDS 211.1-P-3.1, Proximity-1 Space Link Protocol--Physical Layer

[Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int]

Please find attached the SLP WG review of our RID dispositions having 
overlap with SLP.

Best Regards, Enrico
 
----- Forwarded by Enrico Vassallo/esoc/ESA on 17/09/2012 09:37 -----

From:
"Kazz, Greg J (313B)" <greg.j.kazz at jpl.nasa.gov>
To:
"Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int" <Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int>
Cc:
"sls-slp at mailman.ccsds.org" <sls-slp at mailman.ccsds.org>
Date:
14/09/2012 23:17
Subject:
SLP WG review of CCSDS 211.1-P-3.1, Proximity-1 Space Link 
Protocol--Physical Layer



Enrico,

Here are the SLP WG inputs to you regarding the RID resolutions that 
overlap SLP and RFM for the Physical layer blue book:

Our review has yielded the following remarks:

Item 1: Prefer the second option. Rationale ? prefer to keep titles of 
sections, diagrams, tables, etc as short as possible and not be verbose. 
Therefore clarifying upfront in the definitions section that the word 
"forward" is an abreviation in these documents for "forward link" and visa 
versa for "return" should provide ample guidance to the user.

Item 2: Agree with Enrico's RID resolution here.

Item 3: Agree with the RID resolution, but change the phrase "being 
provided" to "provided". Rationale: It is verbose.

Item 4: Agree with the RID resolution.

Item 5: Agree with the RID resolution, but also change the word, 
"communications" to "communication" as in the previous RID. Let's be 
consistent.

Item 6: Agree with Enrico's RID resolution and text here.

Items 7,8,9, 10: Not part of SLP purview ? no comment.

Best regards,

Greg Kazz
Chairman SLS-SLP WG

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