[Sls-rfm] CCSDS-883-R-0 CESG Request for final review

[Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int]

Dear Kevin,

on top of the comments submitted directly to you by Jean-Luc and Wai, I am 
pleased to send you some comments in my role of SFCG Executive Summary. 
They relate to:

References 33 and 42    --> latest approved versions included

Section 3.2.1           --> title changed 
                              text added to indicate further revisions to 
REF 33 and 42 are expected and as such to use latest version
                              revised table 3-1 aligned with SFCG (table 
title changed for consistency with SFCG table)
                              new table 3-2 aligned with SFCG (table title 
changed for consistency with SFCG table)

Sections 3.2.2/3.2.3    --> moved after tables 3-1 and 3-2

I trust these changes should not be of concern to you. In case of issues, 
feel free to liaise with Dennis who is also active in SFCG.

Regards, Enrico





From:   "Kevin K Gifford" <kevin.gifford at colorado.edu>
To:     "Jonathan Wilmot" <jonathan.j.wilmot at nasa.gov>, 
"Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez at esa.int" <Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez at esa.int>, 
"dennis.k.lee at jpl.nasa.gov" <dennis.k.lee at jpl.nasa.gov>, 
"Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int" <Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int>, 
"sls-rfm at mailman.ccsds.org" <sls-rfm at mailman.ccsds.org>
Cc:     "Shames, Peter M (US 312B)" <peter.m.shames at jpl.nasa.gov>, "Ray 
Wagner" <raymond.s.wagner at nasa.gov>, "CCSDS Secretariat" 
<thomas.gannett at tgannett.net>, "Kevin K Gifford" 
<kevin.gifford at colorado.edu>
Date:   02/12/21 16:51
Subject:        CCSDS-883-R-0 CESG Request for final review



Dear Jonathan, Ignacio, Dennis, Enrico, SLS-RFM - 

I have worked with Dr. Peter Shames to update CCSDS-883-0-R-0 to ensure 
SLS concerns are properly addressed per the CESG.

The attached CCSDS-883-0-R-0 document is a result of Peter and I's efforts 
to assuage any remaining concerns.

I am requesting that SLS reviews the updates to the document for consensus 
purposes.
-- All updates are tracked via "Track Changes"
-- A suggestion is to simply click "Next Change" to see the updates
-- The primary updates (sans editorial nits) are on pages 1-1, 1-2, 2-1, 
2-5, 3-1 and 3-2

@Jonathan: Please review and provide your acceptance or any remaining 
concerns at your earliest convenience.

@Igancio: Can you and SLS-RFM please review and provide your acceptance or 
any remaining concerns at your earliest convenience.

I believe that the review will take minimal time as Peter and I worked to 
ensure the updates would resolve SLS concerns expressed to the CESG.

Please let me know if any questions.

Thanks to all!

Kevin[attachment "v0.11.00.14 883x0b1_pre-CMC_Approval 01-SEA.doc" deleted 
by Enrico Vassallo/esoc/ESA] 


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