<span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Dear Kevin,</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">on top of the
comments submitted directly to you by Jean-Luc and Wai, I am pleased to
send you some comments in my role of SFCG Executive Summary. They relate
to:</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">References 33
and 42 --> latest approved versions
included</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Section 3.2.1
-->
title changed </span>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">
text added to indicate further
revisions to REF 33 and 42 are expected and as such to use latest version</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">
revised table 3-1 aligned with
SFCG (table title changed for consistency with SFCG table)</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">
new table 3-2 aligned with SFCG
(table title changed for consistency with SFCG table)</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Sections 3.2.2/3.2.3
--> moved after tables 3-1 and 3-2</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">I trust these
changes should not be of concern to you. In case of issues, feel free to
liaise with Dennis who is also active in SFCG.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Regards, Enrico</span>
<br>
<br>
<br>
<br>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">From:
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">"Kevin
K Gifford" <kevin.gifford@colorado.edu></span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">To:
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">"Jonathan
Wilmot" <jonathan.j.wilmot@nasa.gov>, "Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int"
<Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int>, "dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov"
<dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov>, "Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int"
<Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int>, "sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org"
<sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org></span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">Cc:
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">"Shames,
Peter M (US 312B)" <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov>, "Ray
Wagner" <raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov>, "CCSDS Secretariat"
<thomas.gannett@tgannett.net>, "Kevin K Gifford" <kevin.gifford@colorado.edu></span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">Date:
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">02/12/21
16:51</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">Subject:
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">CCSDS-883-R-0
CESG Request for final review</span>
<br>
<hr noshade>
<br>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">Dear Jonathan, Ignacio,
Dennis, Enrico, SLS-RFM - </span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">I have worked with
Dr. Peter Shames to update CCSDS-883-0-R-0 to ensure SLS concerns are properly
addressed per the CESG.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">The attached CCSDS-883-0-R-0
document is a result of Peter and I's efforts to assuage any remaining
concerns.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">I am requesting that
SLS reviews the updates to the document for consensus purposes.</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">-- All updates are
tracked via "Track Changes"</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">-- A suggestion is
to simply click "Next Change" to see the updates</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">-- The primary updates
(sans editorial nits) are on pages 1-1, 1-2, 2-1, 2-5, 3-1 and 3-2</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">@Jonathan: Please
review and provide your acceptance or any remaining concerns at your earliest
convenience.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">@Igancio: Can you
and SLS-RFM please review and provide your acceptance or any remaining
concerns at your earliest convenience.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">I believe that the
review will take minimal time as Peter and I worked to ensure the updates
would resolve SLS concerns expressed to the CESG.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">Please let me know
if any questions.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">Thanks to all!</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">Kevin[attachment
"v0.11.00.14 883x0b1_pre-CMC_Approval 01-SEA.doc" deleted by
Enrico Vassallo/esoc/ESA] </span>
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