[SLS-DC] Nearly final draft of GB for 123B2

[Kiely, Aaron B (US 332B)]

Dear Working Group,

I have done a thorough review of CCSDS-120.2-G-2 and uploaded a revised draft to the CWE at:
	CWE Private / 123.1-B / GreenBook / final / 120x2g2-1021.08.10-track_changes.{pdf, docx} (with changes tracked)
	CWE Private / 123.1-B / GreenBook / final / 120x2g2-1021.08.10-clean.{pdf, docx} (with changes accepted)

I think it’s nearly done. I am only aware of the following remaining items:
	(1) Footnote 9 (page 6-13) should be reviewed and rewritten as needed by Ian (or anyone else with more AAT experience than me).
	(2) We need vector graphics versions of Figures 4-30 and 4-31. (Roberto)
	(3) I believe that Pleiades is not an acronym, so I’ve replaced all-caps with lower case. But should it be Pleiades or Pléiades? I’ve seen both used.

I’ve made a lot of edits. Please take a look, especially at text that you have contributed recently, to make sure I haven’t made things worse.

We can review and approve this at the next meeting. Or if we can reach consensus earlier, we can get this into the queue ahead of documents that are likely to be ready at the meeting. Please send me an email with revisions or let me know if you think it’s ready as-is. For any revisions, please start from the “clean” version so that it’s easy for me to spot your edits.

Thanks to everyone for your contribution to this long project.

Regards,
Aaron
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