[SLS-CC] FW: CESG-P-2023-01-002 Approval to publish CCSDS 130.11-G-2, SCCC—Summary of Definition and Performance (Green Book, Issue 2)

[Andrea Modenini]

Dear WG,

In response to the CESG pool (email below), I prepared a new version of 130x11g (docx file) that replies to the comments of SEA (pdf file).

SEA did already a preliminary check, and confirmed that changes satisfies the conditions.



Before sending the document to SLS and Secretariat, could you please let me know if you have any objection with the changes by Thursday 16th, EOB?

Deadline is short, but changes are really a few.





Regards



PS: @Lee, Dennis K (US 332G)<mailto:dennis.k.lee at jpl.nasa.gov>, being a shared book, I guess we need also RFM consensus









Ph.D. Andrea Modenini

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-----Original Message-----
From: CCSDS Secretariat <thomas.gannett at tgannett.net>
Sent: 10 February 2023 23:58
To: Andrea Modenini <Andrea.Modenini at esa.int>; Massimo Bertinelli <Massimo.Bertinelli at esa.int>
Cc: Peter.M.Shames at jpl.nasa.gov
Subject: Re: CESG-P-2023-01-002 Approval to publish CCSDS 130.11-G-2, SCCC—Summary of Definition and Performance (Green Book, Issue 2)



Dear Document Rapporteur,



The CESG poll to approve publication of CCSDS 130.11-G-2, SCCC—Summary of Definition and Performance (Green Book, Issue 2) concluded with conditions. Please negotiate disposition of the conditions directly with the AD(s) who voted to approve with conditions and CC the Secretariat on all related correspondence.





CESG E-Poll Identifier:  CESG-P-2023-01-002 Approval to publish CCSDS 130.11-G-2, SCCC—Summary of Definition and Performance (Green Book, Issue 2)



Results of CESG poll beginning 26 January 2023 and ending 9 February 2023:



                 Abstain:  1 (14.29%) (Duhaze)

 Approve Unconditionally:  5 (71.43%) (Barkley, Merri, Cola, Aguilar Sanchez, Wilmot)

 Approve with Conditions:  1 (14.29%) (Shames)

 Disapprove with Comment:  0 (0%)



CONDITIONS/COMMENTS:



     Erik Barkley (Approve Unconditionally):  ​A minor comment, not a condition -- a suggestion for improved presentation re Figure 3-1 and 3-2: Perhaps a subgraph with a different scale could be considered – as presented for figure 3-1, all the blue lines are hard to distinguish. The main message is apparent but the distinctions among ACM13 - 17 tend to get lost. There is a similar consideration with regard to the orange lines in figure 3 – 2.



     Peter Shames (Approve with Conditions):  ​This document makes heavy reference to the actual standard.  As such it is almost as if the reader needs to read the standard first, and then this "description",  I noted a numder of editorial changes for clarification in the body of the text.  They are for clarity and do not make any substantive changes to the body of the document.



     Jonathan Wilmot (Approve Unconditionally):  ​This book does read as though it was a user's guide for the standard. This is different than most Green books but I think it is reasonable to do it this way.





Total Respondents:  7



All Areas responded to this question.







SECRETARIAT INTERPRETATION OF RESULTS:  Approved with Conditions

PROPOSED SECRETARIAT ACTION:            Generate CMC poll after conditions have been addressed



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