[Sis-dtn] Fwd: [dtn] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-03.txt

[Burleigh, Scott C (312B)]

Mani, thanks very much for these comments.  I have finally made time to go through them in detail and have marked in some notes.

Scott

From: Manikantan Ramadas [mailto:mramadas at gmail.com]
Sent: Tuesday, May 24, 2016 2:42 AM
To: Burleigh, Scott C (312B) <scott.c.burleigh at jpl.nasa.gov>; kfall at cmu.edu; Edward.Birrane at jhuapl.edu; manikantan at istrac.gov.in
Cc: sis-dtn at mailman.ccsds.org; Marc Blanchet <marc.blanchet at viagenie.ca>; dtn at ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Sis-dtn] Fwd: [dtn] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-03.txt

Hi all,
Please find my comments after going through the BP IETF draft - attached. I have them in MAJOR (semantic issues) and MINOR (mostly syntactic or minor-sematic issues) sections.
As a suggestion, it would be nice to have Sender and Receiver State Transition Diagrams. It would help in understanding and implementation. I know the pain in making ASCII text diagrams; perhaps a PDF version of it - made with any diagram editor - may be provided as a supplement?
Manikantan Ramadas,
ISTRAC/ISRO

On Wed, Apr 27, 2016 at 6:13 PM, Marc Blanchet <marc.blanchet at viagenie.ca<mailto:marc.blanchet at viagenie.ca>> wrote:

Hello,
FYI, this is the IETF wg last call for comments for the new version of the Bundle Protocol, primarily edited by Scott Burleigh. If you have any comments, please make sure to send them to the IETF mailing list (dtn at ietf.org<mailto:dtn at ietf.org>). This community should provide its comments so that the standards are useful for all. Compared to RFC5050, which was done under the IRTF (Research) and defined as « experimental », the intent of this work is to create an IETF Standard, that would enable various industries and companies to implement in standard products.

deadline for comments: May 25th 2016.

Marc, co-chair of IETF dtn working group.

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From: Brian Haberman brian at innovationslab.net<mailto:brian at innovationslab.net>
To: dtn at ietf.org<mailto:dtn at ietf.org>
Subject: [dtn] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-03.txt
Date: Wed, 27 Apr 2016 08:26:39 -0400

All,
This note starts a 4-week DTN Working Group last call on advancing:

    Title           : Bundle Protocol

    Authors         : Scott Burleigh

                      Kevin Fall

                      Edward J. Birrane

    Filename        : draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-03.txt

as a Proposed Standard. Substantive comments should be sent to the DTN
mailing list. Editorial comments can be sent to the document authors.
This last call will end May 25, 2016.

Regards,
Brian

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