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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Mani, thanks very much for these comments. I have finally made time to go through them in detail and have marked in some notes.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Scott<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> Manikantan Ramadas [mailto:mramadas@gmail.com]
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<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, May 24, 2016 2:42 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Burleigh, Scott C (312B) <scott.c.burleigh@jpl.nasa.gov>; kfall@cmu.edu; Edward.Birrane@jhuapl.edu; manikantan@istrac.gov.in<br>
<b>Cc:</b> sis-dtn@mailman.ccsds.org; Marc Blanchet <marc.blanchet@viagenie.ca>; dtn@ietf.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Sis-dtn] Fwd: [dtn] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-03.txt<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Please find my comments after going through the BP IETF draft - attached. I have them in MAJOR (semantic issues) and MINOR (mostly syntactic or minor-sematic issues) sections.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">As a suggestion, it would be nice to have Sender and Receiver State Transition Diagrams. It would help in understanding and implementation. I know the pain in making ASCII text diagrams; perhaps a PDF version
of it - made with any diagram editor - may be provided as a supplement?<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Manikantan Ramadas,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Wed, Apr 27, 2016 at 6:13 PM, Marc Blanchet <<a href="mailto:marc.blanchet@viagenie.ca" target="_blank">marc.blanchet@viagenie.ca</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p>Hello,<br>
FYI, this is the IETF wg last call for comments for the new version of the Bundle Protocol, primarily edited by Scott Burleigh. If you have any comments, please make sure to send them to the IETF mailing list (<a href="mailto:dtn@ietf.org" target="_blank">dtn@ietf.org</a>).
This community should provide its comments so that the standards are useful for all. Compared to RFC5050, which was done under the IRTF (Research) and defined as « experimental », the intent of this work is to create an IETF Standard, that would enable various
industries and companies to implement in standard products. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p>deadline for comments: May 25th 2016.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>Marc, co-chair of IETF dtn working group.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>Forwarded message:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p>From: Brian Haberman <a href="mailto:brian@innovationslab.net" target="_blank">
brian@innovationslab.net</a><br>
To: <a href="mailto:dtn@ietf.org" target="_blank">dtn@ietf.org</a><br>
Subject: [dtn] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-03.txt<br>
Date: Wed, 27 Apr 2016 08:26:39 -0400<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>All,<br>
This note starts a 4-week DTN Working Group last call on advancing:<o:p></o:p></p>
<pre><code> Title : Bundle Protocol<o:p></o:p></code></pre>
<pre><code> Authors : Scott Burleigh<o:p></o:p></code></pre>
<pre><code> Kevin Fall<o:p></o:p></code></pre>
<pre><code> Edward J. Birrane<o:p></o:p></code></pre>
<pre><code> Filename : draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-03.txt<o:p></o:p></code></pre>
<p>as a Proposed Standard. Substantive comments should be sent to the DTN<br>
mailing list. Editorial comments can be sent to the document authors.<br>
This last call will end May 25, 2016.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>Regards,<br>
Brian<o:p></o:p></p>
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