[Sis-csi] Revisions against Ver. 13

[Ed Criscuolo]

Keith,

   I'm sending my edits to you separately so an not to clog the list
with that 7+ MB doc.

   Some of it is just cleanup, but I added a substantial amount of
stuff to the security section, based on work I'm doing elsewhere.
Change tracking was left on.

@(^.^)@  Ed


Scott, Keith L. wrote:

> 
> We had the cislunar telecon today.  The nominal plan for finishing off 
> the architecture document is:
>  
> Scott will provide something on Trans-Lunar for the placeholder near the 
> end of the document.
>  
> I think that multicast and QoS are sort of important because they're
> 1) real different from the way things are done now
> 2) QoS at least is really important because everybody seems worried that 
> this new-fangled IP-thing is going to throw all their data away.
>  
> There are some placeholders in the conops section for 'Crewed Missions' 
> that include both QoS and multicast (Mike K?).  Unless someone else has 
> a burning desire to do so, I'll try my hand at some multicast and QoS 
> conops and try to expand on at least the QoS portion of the main part of 
> the document (sectin 4?)
>  
> After that I think there's mostly cleanup: we need to tighten up the 
> security section and references, etc., and the tie-ins to PEPs and DTN 
> need to be tightened some, but I don't think there are major conceptual 
> changes.  PLEASE SPEAK UP IF YOU DISAGREE.
>  
> I would like to get the telecons going again at 3:30PM EST Thursdays to 
> wrap this document up and to start talking about what to do for a set of 
> Red Books.  I could easily see the red books involving some 
> testing/prototyping, and we need to figure out how that might fit into 
> everyone's schedules / resource constraints.
>  
>         --keith
>  
> 
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