[Sis-csi] Section 8 Revisions

[James L. Rash]

At 12:08 AM -0400 9/15/05, Krupiarz, Christopher wrote:
>Enclosed are revisions to section 8 for review.  My attempt was to take
>Keith's bulleted comments and put them into paragraph form. 
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>Chris
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Chris,

I suggest that the title of section 8.1.1.2 should be changed from

      8.1.1.2	CFDP Transmission from Instrument to User

to

      8.1.1.2	Reliable File Transfer from Instrument to User

This works better because it more clearly indicates in more general 
terms what the section is about.   CFDP is not the only alternative 
for reliable file transfer when, for example, a return link is 
unavailable, and starting in the third sentence, the use of CFDP is 
amply specified for the given example anyway.

I would also suggest adding the following sentence in this section:

NORM (NACK-Oriented Reliable Multicast) (RFC 3940) can also be 
considered as an alternative choice for a reliable file and stream 
delivery protocol over IP.

This sentence is appropriate for a Green Book, as it serves to 
promote the reader's understanding through additional relevant 
information.
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