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<div>At 12:08 AM -0400 9/15/05, Krupiarz, Christopher wrote:</div>
<blockquote type="cite" cite>Enclosed are revisions to section 8 for
review. My attempt was to take<br>
Keith's bulleted comments and put them into paragraph form. <br>
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Chris<br>
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<div>Chris,</div>
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<div>I suggest that the title of section 8.1.1.2 should be changed
from</div>
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<div> <font face="Times New Roman" size="+1"
color="#000000"><b> 8.1.1.2</b></font><font face="Arial" size="+1"
color="#000000"><b><x-tab> </x-tab></b></font><font
face="Times New Roman" size="+1" color="#000000"><b>CFDP Transmission
from Instrument to User</b></font></div>
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<div>to</div>
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<div> <font face="Times New Roman" size="+1"
color="#000000"><b> 8.1.1.2</b></font><font face="Arial" size="+1"
color="#000000"><b><x-tab> </x-tab></b></font><font
face="Times New Roman" size="+1" color="#000000"><b>Reliable File
Transfer from Instrument to User</b></font></div>
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<div>This works better because it more clearly indicates in more
general terms what the section is about. CFDP is not the
only alternative for reliable file transfer when, for example, a
return link is unavailable, and starting in the third sentence, the
use of CFDP is amply specified for the given example anyway. </div>
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<div>I would also suggest adding the following sentence in this
section:</div>
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<blockquote>NORM (<font color="#000000">NACK-Oriented</font> Reliable
Multicast) (RFC 3940) can also be considered as an alternative choice
for a reliable file and stream delivery protocol over IP.</blockquote>
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<div>This sentence is appropriate for a Green Book, as it serves to
promote the reader's understanding through additional relevant
information.</div>
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