[Sea-sa] Proposed resolutions for CESG PIDs on RASDSv2 Pink Book, CCSDS 311.0-M-2

[Shames, Peter M (US 9740)]

Dear SEA SAWG Colleagues & CESG reviewers,

I have reviewed the PIDs submitted during the CESG “approval to publish” review of the RASDSv2 Pink Book.   I have proposed resolutions for these PIDs and also made the corresponding edits to the document and to the PPT files used for the figures.  These files are attached.

In the interest of moving ahead to the final stage of CMC approval to publish I would like to ask you to review the PIDs, and the proposed resolutions, which show up in the file “PIDs & Proposed Resolutions RASDSv2”.  This has both sets of PIDs, from Erik and Ignacio, and a list of other minor changed figures.  If you wish to see the text changes please reference the file “311x0m12_CESG_PIDs-track 21Nov24”, which has track changes turned on and note for all the fixes.  If you want to see the largely minor changes to figures please review the identified pages in the file “SEA SAWG RASDS Figures CESG PID fixes 22Nov24”.

Assuming that no one has issues with the proposed changes I would like to ask for affirmative feedback by Tuesday, 3 Dec.  If there are issues please indicate that no later than that date, and we will plan to hold a meeting to resolve any final issues at the normal SEA-SA WG telecon scheduled for 9 Dec 2024 @ 0700 Pacific Standard Time.

Thanks in advance for your support.

Best regards, and Happy Thanksgiving, Peter

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