[Sea-sa] Outline of Green Book

[Shames, Peter M (312B)]

Hi Roger,

Welcome back.  Hope you had a great trip, must have been spectacular.  We did not discuss your materials with you absent, we largely focused on the book contents.  Your independent review and feedback on that would be valuable and it may be that some condensations of sec 2 & 3 would be of use.  I chose to keep the construction parallel to the SCCS-ADD/ARD, but that may not be essential.

Talk to you all tomorrow AM/PM/Late evening.

Cheers, Peter


From: Roger Thompson <roger.rocketbrain at btinternet.com>
Date: Wednesday, February 8, 2017 at 8:09 AM
To: Peter Shames <peter.m.shames at jpl.nasa.gov>
Cc: SEA-SA <sea-sa at mailman.ccsds.org>
Subject: RE: [Sea-sa] Outline of Green Book

Hi Peter,

I have now returned from the southern continent – apologies for being out of the loop for a while.

In preparation for tomorrow’s telecon, I have reviewed your outline and attempted to annotate it where I believe I can contribute, as requested. Please see attached.   I have also raised some comments, for clarification/discussion on the expected content of some sections.  Given the short descriptions, there does seem to be some repetition on some topics.  I realise Section 2 is Introductory and later sections provide the detail, but Section 3 seems to cover an intermediate level of detail, which runs the risk of duplicating either Section 2 or the later sections.  I think we need to be clearer about its Scope – or possibly consider removing/merging it into the other sections.

It would also be useful for me to go over the new contributions I provided at the beginning of January, and get any feedback.  I realise you may have discussed this in the previous telecon.

Cheers,

Roger

From: SEA-SA [mailto:sea-sa-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org] On Behalf Of Shames, Peter M (312B)
Sent: 19 January 2017 18:30
To: SEA-SA
Subject: [Sea-sa] Outline of Green Book

Dear SEA SA Colleagues,

Attached please find the updated draft of the Green Book outline.

As we discussed, please review it and try to identify two things:

1)       The parts of this document to which you can actively contribute

2)       The parts of this book where the materials you have already prepared, or are preparing, will fit in

Thanks, Peter

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