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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Hi Roger,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Welcome back. Hope you had a great trip, must have been spectacular. We did not discuss your materials with you absent, we largely focused on the book contents. Your independent review and feedback on that
would be valuable and it may be that some condensations of sec 2 & 3 would be of use. I chose to keep the construction parallel to the SCCS-ADD/ARD, but that may not be essential.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Talk to you all tomorrow AM/PM/Late evening.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Cheers, Peter<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><b><span style="color:black">From: </span>
</b><span style="color:black">Roger Thompson <roger.rocketbrain@btinternet.com><br>
<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, February 8, 2017 at 8:09 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>Peter Shames <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov><br>
<b>Cc: </b>SEA-SA <sea-sa@mailman.ccsds.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>RE: [Sea-sa] Outline of Green Book<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D">Hi Peter,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D">I have now returned from the southern continent – apologies for being out of the loop for a while.
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D">In preparation for tomorrow’s telecon, I have reviewed your outline and attempted to annotate it where I believe I can contribute, as requested. Please see attached.
I have also raised some comments, for clarification/discussion on the expected content of some sections. Given the short descriptions, there does seem to be some repetition on some topics. I realise Section 2 is Introductory and later sections provide the
detail, but Section 3 seems to cover an intermediate level of detail, which runs the risk of duplicating either Section 2 or the later sections. I think we need to be clearer about its Scope – or possibly consider removing/merging it into the other sections.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D">It would also be useful for me to go over the new contributions I provided at the beginning of January, and get any feedback. I realise you may have discussed this in
the previous telecon.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D">Cheers,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D">Roger</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Tahoma">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Tahoma"> SEA-SA [mailto:sea-sa-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Shames, Peter M (312B)<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 19 January 2017 18:30<br>
<b>To:</b> SEA-SA<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Sea-sa] Outline of Green Book</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear SEA SA Colleagues,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Attached please find the updated draft of the Green Book outline.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">As we discussed, please review it and try to identify two things:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:1.0in;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">1)</span><span style="font-size:7.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman"">
</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt">The parts of this document to which you can actively contribute</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:1.0in;text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">2)</span><span style="font-size:7.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman"">
</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt">The parts of this book where the materials you have already prepared, or are preparing, will fit in</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thanks, Peter</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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