[Moims-sc] Updated MO Green book for WG review

Mon Mar 4 16:57:20 UTC 2019

Sam,

My comments are attached.  A lot of work has been done.  I think the flow works well and it won’t be hard to incorporate the clarifications and comments in my list.

Dan

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From: MOIMS-SC [mailto:moims-sc-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org] On Behalf Of Sam Cooper
Sent: Monday, March 04, 2019 4:35 AM
To: MOIMS-SC at mailman.ccsds.org
Subject: Re: [Moims-sc] Updated MO Green book for WG review

Dear All,

Just a quick reminder for comments if you have them are due by the 8th.

Best regards,
Sam.

On 14/02/2019 13:41, Sam Cooper wrote:
Dear All,

Please find below the link to the latest draft of the MO Concept Green Book for review:

https://cwe.ccsds.org/moims/docs/MOIMS-SMandC/Draft%20Documents/Concept%20Green%20Book/Green%20Book%20Outline%20R5%20Feb%202019.docx?Web=1<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__cwe.ccsds.org_moims_docs_MOIMS-2DSMandC_Draft-2520Documents_Concept-2520Green-2520Book_Green-2520Book-2520Outline-2520R5-2520Feb-25202019.docx-3FWeb-3D1&d=DwMCaQ&c=ApwzowJNAKKw3xye91w7BE1XMRKi2LN9kiMk5Csz9Zk&r=BN62OVKal4ByIRepHNuyNT6tYCZFwitijyBBGujQm8E&m=dW8LlGE2T7OsTsk0bMVFac-aua40QVGhZ_ZK0EOjZnc&s=_pIJr6rDTV1m3xTn0m7ZEzrbWoj8PxjbX11D5y7i3Mc&e=>

Please could people provide comments etc by 8th of March in three weeks time.

The contents of the book is 95% complete, just the future directions section to be expanded on, if people could suggest content for that as part of the review that would be very helpful. It is also not in official CCSDS format, but that is relatively easy to add at a later date.

I think Peter has done a great job in writing this, however it has taken far longer than we had hoped therefore I would like to suggest that I take over the editing/updating of the document from this point forward. If there is an issue with this suggestion please let me know otherwise I will assume that it is acceptable.

Best regards,
Sam.

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