[Moims-sc] CCSDS MO Green Book draft for WG review

[Sam Cooper]

Hi Olivier,

If you can send them to me before the meeting it would give us all time 
to review them, but if that's not possible we can see how we do for time 
on the day.

Cheers,
Sam


On 02/10/2018 14:26, Churlaud Olivier wrote:
>
> Dear Sam,
>
> How do you want us to proceed ? Should we review the word and transmit 
> comments?
>
> Or should we only prepare for the discussion during the WG sessions ?
>
> Best regards
>
> Olivier
>
> *De :*MOIMS-SC [mailto:moims-sc-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org] *De la part 
> de* Sam Cooper
> *Envoyé :* mardi 2 octobre 2018 14:31
> *À :* MOIMS-SC at mailman.ccsds.org
> *Objet :* [Moims-sc] CCSDS MO Green Book draft for WG review
>
> Dear All,
>
> Please find the link below for the updated draft Green Book for MO:
>
> https://cwe.ccsds.org/moims/docs/MOIMS-SMandC/Draft%20Documents/Concept%20Green%20Book/Green%20Book%20Outline%20R4%20Sept%202018.docx
>
> The document is considerable advancement on the previous version, 
> however it should be noted that this book is still a work in progress 
> as it does not have any CCSDS book formatting or document boiler plate 
> sections and three sections are still outstanding (sections 8 - Comms, 
> section 10 - Future directions, and Section 11 Glossary of terms), 
> they will be added once the meat of the document is complete
>
> There are also no diagrams in the document, it would have been helpful 
> to have these there but it was felt that getting the structure and 
> text of the document out for discussion was more important than 
> spending time developing the diagrams. Once the document is more 
> stable these will be added in.
>
> The current plan is to review the document at the Berlin meeting in 
> two weeks, however this will be time limited so we will not be doing a 
> page by page review, please have any areas you wish to discuss 
> selected by then. We hope for an updated, correctly formatted draft 
> before the end of the year.
>
> Best regards,
> Sam.
>

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