[MOIMS-NAV-EXEC] Navigation Data - Definitions & Conventions Green Book 3.6 Proofreading Assignments

[Berry, David S (3920)]

All:

Attached are materials for the "divide & conquer" proofreading of the "Navigation Data - Definitions & Conventions" Green Book version 3.6 (section assignments, a blank CRM, and the "changes accepted" version of the document).

As you know, this document has been in revision for some time, and Cheryl has recently finalized technical changes to the document. We believe it to be technically ready for publication.

However, we need to perform a proofreading of the document before proceeding to the next step. Each assignment is about 12 pages (57 pages requiring proofreading, 5 groups of reviewers, average 11.4 pages each); one is a bit longer, another a bit shorter.

Please note your assignments in the attachment, review the assigned pages for editorial corrections, fill out the CRM if you find anything that needs to be corrected**, and send it to (at minimum) me and Cheryl by 31-May-2019. You may also send to the WG mailing list if you prefer.

** Definition of "anything that needs to be corrected": The focus of this effort is grammar, spelling, awkward wording, etc. As noted, in the recent Spring Meetings, we agreed that the document was technically ready for publication. However, from a technical standpoint, if you think there is something that is WRONG, identify that; if there is something UNCLEAR, suggest a clarification. Otherwise, we leave it alone in this proofreading. Ignore page numbering and other footer artifacts; these will be corrected by the CCSDS Technical Editor.

Please advise if issues arise...

Regards, and Thanks!
David

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