[MOIMS-NAV-EXEC] ADM P1.8 Review Assignments

[Frank.Dreger at esa.int]

Dear David,

Please excuse the belated input. Here are my comments on ADM p1.8 Annexes 
D, E, F, G, H, I:



Kind regards
Frank Dreger 

ESA – European Space Agency
Frank Dreger
Senior Flight Dynamics Service Manager
Ground Systems Engineering and Innovation Department
ESOC
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All:

Attached are review assignments for the Attitude Data Messages (ADM) P1.8 
draft. Also attached are the "changes accepted" version and the "changes 
tracked" version of the ADM with respect to prior drafts (wrt P1.7, 
which was not formally reviewed, and possibly P1.6). Finally, a blank CRM 
is attached for your comments.

Per the discussion at the most recent Nav WG telecon, the target date to 
complete reviews is 15-Jul-2018.

NOTE: This review is a TECHNICAL review, which is different than the 
proofreading reviews we have recently completed for the "Navigation Data - 
Definitions & Conventions" Green Book and the "Re-Entry Data Message" Red 
Book. These recent reviews in general assumed stable, converged technical 
content, and we were looking for misspellings, awkward phraseology, 
punctuation errors, etc. The ADM P1.8 is the first version of the ADM to 
include the new Attitude Comprehensive Message and other changes to the 
APM and AEM, so it will be important to ensure technical correctness.

When you have completed your review, please email your CRM to the WG at 
moims-nav-exec at mailman.ccsds.org . 

Regards,
David

P.S.:  Apologies for the delay in sending out these assignments. As I 
noted during last week's telecon, I wanted to ensure that the proofreading 
reviews for documents nearing publication were prioritized. I decided that 
the best way to do that was to not send out these assignments until the 
proofreading reviews were complete.

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