[MOIMS-NAV-EXEC] RE: NHM Version 12

[Oltrogge, Daniel]

My comments and suggestions (minor).

Thanks,

Dan

Daniel L. Oltrogge
SDC Program Manager & Senior Research Astrodynamicist
Center for Space Standards and Innovation
Analytical Graphics Incorporated
Voice: 719-660-5142; E-mail: oltrogge at agi.com

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Subject: [MOIMS-NAV-EXEC] FW: NHM Version 12


All:

Attached is the NHM White Book version 12 that Joe has prepared.  See his notes below for special instructions.

I've also attached document review assignments, in keeping with our recent practice of "divide and conquer" recommended by Juergen, and a blank CRM for your comments.  Please complete your review and commentary by 01-Jul-2015.

Regards,
David


From: Joseph Hashmall <joseph.hashmall at ai-solutions.com<mailto:joseph.hashmall at ai-solutions.com>>
Date: Saturday, May 23, 2015 at 11:32 AM
To: David Berry <David.S.Berry at jpl.nasa.gov<mailto:David.S.Berry at jpl.nasa.gov>>
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Subject: NHM Version 12


David,



I've finished the NHM version 12 and attached copies.



There are several places in it that need extra scrutiny and probably some additions.



1) I've completely rewritten sections 3 and 5 and they should be examined with care.

2) I've made a stab at putting in Annex A.

    The numbering in the requirement list table is different from what was in the CDM (the model I used) and I don't know it it conforms with the CCSDS requirement for this table.

    ​The column giving references in this table may need to be emmended.  I have not included any references to the XML section and these may need to be added.

3) In Table D-1 I've updated some of the SANA registry items.  The registry should be updated to match the table but I'm not certain how to do this.  Am I authorized to do it directly or do I have to go through some process of getting approval?

4) Although I've updated the Trace column in Table I-1 I have not included any traces to XML portions of the document.



I'll try to send this to the entire working group as well as separately to you but if you don't get two copies then it probably didn't go through to the entire group.  In that case could you please forward it?



Thanks,



Joe




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